Flowers in the Rain

~ a little love scribble on a rainy afternoon ~

 

 

 

 

He brings me...

 

flowers in the rain

wild as they grow

my hair the silken storm

sweeping his pillow

his eyes the tender light

as two shadows blend

his hands the gentle guide

to the rainbows end

and when the thunder strikes

and petals softly fall

he gathers all my love

as moments seem to stall

in storms that rise again

and in our hearts remain

wild as they grow…

 

flowers in the rain

~~~

 

Reviews

[Brian]

"my hair the silken storm
sweeping his pillow
his eyes the tender light
as two shadows blend
his hands the gentle guide
to the rainbows end"

It doesn't get any better than this. Just so incredibly beautiful. I can picture every part of it. And I love everything I imagined. So expertly crafted! Fantastic, Julie. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Trace]

This feel like a brief moment of ecstasy
Mixed with a whole lot of emotion.

Very beautifully done.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace! :) Julie

[dan]

Julie, There is something about the image of beautiful flowers and rainfall that is mesmerizing. While we humans may look outside and think, "Oh nuts, it's raining!" the flowers celebrate as they drink in their life source, their ability to thrive. And there is nothing more beautiful than the sound of rain hitting roofs and windows at night, a natural milieu for snuggling and other activities. An ideal romantic buzz permeates this piece, grounds for love and so much more. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Your comments are always so lovely and encouraging. Thank you Dan. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[wordman]

you are welcome julie

[emmajoy]

Your words positively purr from the screen .. they're beautiful, romantic, gentle and surely personal. Smiling here, i feel like a voyeuse!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words lovely lady! :) Julie

[emmajoy]

Still smiling.. sighh

[R Smith]

just so beautiful Julie, as always you are the queen of romantically gorgeous poetry,

my hair the silken storm
sweeping his pillow
his eyes the tender light
as two shadows blend,

sheer perfect magic from a pen/keyboard, love every single word of this :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Richard. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW WoW WoW!!!!
amazing poetry........
so romantic sweet and tender.......
"wild as they grow…

flowers in the rain"

Absolutely loved it!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a beautifully romantic write. I THINK you posted this on the other site that shall remain nameless. I remember the"flowers in the rain" line. Wonderful work. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Lydi. I may have posted something like this - unfortunately, I lost most of my poetry when I left the other site. I sure wish I could get it back, but you and I both know who we are dealing with.... Hugs to you my friend! Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Fortunately I always had it saved on my computer. I never posted a poem without saving it. No, they will not cooperate with you. Of that you can be certain. Lydi**

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The image of blending shadows creating a perfect moment in passion for two is captured well in this rainy day scribble; I believe I caught the fragrance of freshly plucked flowers whose olfactory offerings were intensified following the rainfall. Delicate and delicious write, Julie.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Dara]

Your beautiful poem flows with such grace, gentle like the rain and filled with loving thoughts. Simply wonderful, Julie!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. Hugs, Julie

[Saddam]

and petals softly fall
he gathers all my love
as moments seem to stall
in storms that rise again

So soft and romantic. Lovely creation dear.

[Woody]

exquisitely romantic. flowers in the rain. I can not say why this appeals to me. not the same as flowers in clement weather.
another sweet one Julie. love it.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my rainy day scribble. Thank you Woody :) Julie