So Sudden and So Sweet

~ a little love scribble ~

 

 

 

art ~ Steve Hanks

 

 

Soft from the night and lovely for the day

I turn to you

as mist would rise towards the dawn

in mornings first glimpse of the sun

 

You touch me

as sunlight would touch a bed of roses,

so sudden and so sweet

 

And I am warmed by the beam of light

that could not play without the tenderness of your eyes

the joy of your spirit

 

I am yours…you are mine…

                                                       soft and lovely

Reviews

[dan]

Julie, I watched a show on TV a long time ago that showed, using time-lapse photography, a rose as it began from a bud and then bloomed into full flower; I got the feeling that I was seeing something eerily similar as I read this lovely piece. You mention a 'mist,' while I recall dew drops on the buds as they opened. Such a serene and tranquil vision, love in full bloom. Outstanding imagery in use here. Bravo!! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Dan. Thanks so much :) Julie

[blaqpearl]

.lovely piece msjewel....

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[B-poet]

This is a deeply rich and sentimental piece of romanticism. Great work Julie. A sensual masterpiece. :)

[MsJewel]

thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Confuser]

Julie: So Sudden and So Sweet..You blow me away with beautiful metaphors and descriptions of such purity and delight. You are so talented. No one can write love poems like you. Believe me when I say; they aren't scribbles, they touch my heart with sweetness; leaving breathless. Thank you so much. Dale

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your sweet and generous compliment. Thank you Dale. :) Julie

[Confuser]

You're so welcome dear Julie:}D..

[Woody]

as sunrise would touch a bed of roses. a sweet line that stands out among other gorgeous lines.
lovely.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Woody :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

yummmmmmmm! soft, dreamy, honest lovers ... and how much more can a man be more admired than to have the power to shade a sunrise in the blink of his eyes ... another beautiful love poem .. makes me want to be him ;)
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words :) Julie

[R Smith]

soft and lovely is how i see you because of the way you write it feels like your soul is here on this page, oh to be warmed by such a beam of light, would be so beautiful as is this wonderful poem :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very lovely poem, Julie and of course, the picture is magnificent too. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi :) Julie

[~]

A lovely imagery that touches the softness of our spirit. Your romance glows with the morning light. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie