Warmed

~ a little scribble on a sunny spring afternoon ~

 

 

 

Spring floats in…

 

                 as graceful

as the marshmallow cream clouds

dotting a blue sky

 

twirling slowly

on the kiss of a breeze

warmed

with the scent of flowers

tiny buds decorating the morning glories

calling quietly

to a bumble bee

buzzing about

 

I breathe in deep

the fragrance of spring

 

reminiscing

of long walks and lazy picnics

under this same sky

and waking to the scent of morning glories

calling quietly

on the kiss of a breeze

…warmed

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

hi Julie, wish i lived where you do its still chilly here which is really strange, usually sweating buckets by April lol, another intensely beautiful poem from your very fine mind, you make the scene's so real i could walk right into them

'I breathe in deep
the fragrance of spring'

Magnificent !!

[MsJewel]

I'll send you some California sunshine my sweet friend. :) Julie

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I really wanted to close my eyes and enjoy the warm scented breeze but was afraid I might miss the rest of the poem. I think what draws me to your poetry the most is your delicate approach to capturing brief moments in time that leave us with glorious images that last much longer than the read. I also enjoy your subtle use of repetition of lines. For a moment I was the bee, or was it the breeze, or perhaps the budding flowers. No, I was a cloud - a 'marshmallow cream" cloud! A beautiful write!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my lazy spring afternoon. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Larq]

Ahhhh...refreshing,sweet "kiss of a breeze" spring....I felt the sunshine in this piece! Love it! :)

[Matching Socks]

With the spring breeze come the special first signs of spring and memories which can be recreated.
Lovely poem Julie. :)

[wordman]

the birth of us all,spring wth all it`s colors and warm breezes blowing clouds across the sky
a great write Julie,many visions

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and description. Made me wish for warm and relaxing days of Spring. The fragrance of the flowers and the appearance of pretty legs. Made Spring come alive and wonderful. Thank you Julie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[Jamestown]

You really captured the beautiful essence of spring in this
gorgeous piece of work! Imagery is clear and wording to describe
the season perfect, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you James :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Julie Julie Julie… I I I… sigh sigh sigh

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome Julie, I always adore your poetry.

[ZDMusgrove]

Spring is in simple terms a season of passion, warmth, and joy. You captured it perfectly. They say a picture is worth a thousand words, but a single word can create a thousand pictures. You did a great job, and keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words and your friend request. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie

[onceloved]

A beautiful description of nature's beautiful gift you painting it so beautifully what spring is my favorite time of the year too. A bicycles time for me. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Enjoy those bike rides Larry! :) Julie

[onceloved]

Thank you Julie, I really enjoy this time of year I really miss them when it is in the 90s is good weather for riding as long as there this no wind and being in the 100s is really not that bad at all. Last year I was lazy I only did it one time a day going back to two times a day going to 20 miles a day 10 and 10, :) Larry