Warmed

~ a little scribble on a sunny spring afternoon ~

 

 

 

Spring floats in…

 

                 as graceful

as the marshmallow cream clouds

dotting a blue sky

 

twirling slowly

on the kiss of a breeze

warmed

with the scent of flowers

tiny buds decorating the morning glories

calling quietly

to a bumble bee

buzzing about

 

I breathe in deep

the fragrance of spring

 

reminiscing

of long walks and lazy picnics

under this same sky

and waking to the scent of morning glories

calling quietly

on the kiss of a breeze

…warmed

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

hi Julie, wish i lived where you do its still chilly here which is really strange, usually sweating buckets by April lol, another intensely beautiful poem from your very fine mind, you make the scene's so real i could walk right into them

'I breathe in deep
the fragrance of spring'

Magnificent !!

[MsJewel]

I'll send you some California sunshine my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Moonie]

This poem made me feel the gentle warmth of spring too. Your words tucked me under floral blankets with creamy clouds twirling in the pearl-blue skies, and sheltering me from the chill that the past winter has lent.
I love the personification of the morning glories that beckon the breeze and the bumble bees to explore their core.
Wonderful writing, as usual, ma'am!!! :))

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[W R Stowe]

Isn't springtime beautiful? The time to renew summer dreams I will send you a read request of one similar to this one you have painted a portrait with expressions of words

Bill

[MsJewel]

Spring is my favorite time of year. Everything is new again.. I'm looking forward to reading your poem :) Julie

[Adam Adams]

Another write on "spring". Seemed "spring" is your favorite season. Nice. Photography-Art-Work's too good to enjoy with your deepen words. Your poetry seems like a sweet-romantic-lullaby - Morning kisses. Deep sighs. Yawn with pleasure. Breezy winds touched upon hearts with softness. Nice flow of ink.

[MsJewel]

Spring is my favorite season...I'm thrilled you enjoy my scribbles. thank you :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

I really like whatever font you used. It fits with the content of this poem.
This is a great representation of the beauty of spring, minus the pollen, haha. Nice work.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Luna. The font is called Poor Richard :) Julie

[dan]

Julie, Aaah you've done it again. We have been having rain for three solid days now (tornado warnings yesterday in western PA) and it's beating against my office window two feet from me right now. But your write, with its gloriously rich imagery and melodic writing style have me daydreaming of robins and dandelions and yes, morning glories (which are common around here). Picnics can be great too, but somehow millions of flies always intercept an invitation and show up hungry! Thank you for taking me away from the storm ever so briefly, it was a great trip! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

I'm glad I could rescue you from that storm for a few moments Dan. I'm sending you some California sunshine my sweet friend :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... How do I love you in the
Spring when flowers appear like
sonnets in the rain... You nurture
romance like violins softly playing...
Warm nautical winds and sandy shores.
A gentle poem that leaves us with
visions of seagulls against a soft blue
sky. truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

"spring flowers like sonnets in the rain"-a lovely image and a lovely comment my dear friend. :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I love spring, it's the promise of the summer and your poem also gives me this feeling. Thanks for sharing, Julie. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

awww this is just beautiful, i wanted to join her on the roof and soak in that spring sun and stare at the marshmallow cream clouds! Love this! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words :) Julie

[s y e]

Julie, this is truly outstanding writing. You know I have always been a fan.
I love the romantic feel to the poem, your words could make anyone swoon!

~ Gorgeous.

[MsJewel]

It is always lovely when you visit my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[ANTO]

The light and airy feel of this captures and conveys the warm breeze so well Julie.
I love the personification of the flowers - calling to the bees - divine writing.

Can I just say re the image - thats an interesting way to dry one's lingerie
Thank you for the RR, Julie.
:))

[MsJewel]

You don't want to dry your lingerie in the dryer Anto - air drying is much better....
I'm glad you enjoyed the warm breeze! :) Julie