The Days of Spring

~ memories of new love ~

The Days of Spring

 

                                  art ~ Lauri Blank

 

 

A time for love, the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

as tender lace swept meadows fair

upon a breeze to tangle hair…

 

I reminisce, as far above

a whisper of falling in love

danced gracefully in flowery bliss

the sweetest scent upon my wrist

 

A gentle plume to fill the skies

the bluest blue...your lovely eyes

and in your kiss, a warm embrace

to blush my cheeks,

                         I

            still

                      can

                              taste

  

the morning sun and honey dew

tracing the curve of me and you

My heart fluttered…the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

 

Reviews

[Trace]

This is one of the prettiest poems of yours I have read in a long time.
Not that any of your poems are not pretty
But some flow so easily and sound so soft and sensual
When read out loud.

This has . Real feel to it
Like an actual feeling put to verse.

Excellent poetry my dear friend.

HUGGS. . Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean the world to me. Hugs, Julie

[Pash]

This poem is so great, i just feel it in my heart. I keep reading it over and over again and in no time I'll be reciting it

[RED]

What you have written is quite sensational, you made a very good poem!!

Way To Go!, and Keep It Up.

[Lizardo]

Like I said before, you're reall awesome at writing love poems (I don't like them, but yours always have something different and awesome that makes me enjoyed them :) ) I did like this poem a lot and the picture up there too, help a lot imagine the scene.
Great poem!

[wordman]

spring with all it`s beautiful colors and warmth of the sun
to display a love of life and nature

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron. Spring is my favorite time of year. :) Julie

[wordman]

well yes ,I love spring after the cold snaps have moved on lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as Trace said...one of the prettiest---the sweet romance, that scent of spring, new beginnings, the poet's thing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Ana B.]

Another outstanding, beautiful work Julie :)

[Saddam]

The days of spring is here on my computer.
Great read dear.
Marvelous....

[Confuser]

Julie, Dear Julie....your poems are like like butterflies on painted wing.... wish I had the vocabulary to express just how beautiful your poems are...if you ever want me to share on facebook or twitter, let me know.....phenomenal writing....you never fail to deliver a soft dream swept delight. Thank you. Dale

[Lydia Shutter]

Ahhhhh butterflies and spring. You know I was hooked immediately! So very beautiful. The words dance on the page....the rhyme is stunning. Julie, this is a 100! Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Lydi - I appreciate you! Hugs, Julie