The Days of Spring

~ memories of new love ~

The Days of Spring

 

                                  art ~ Lauri Blank

 

 

A time for love, the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

as tender lace swept meadows fair

upon a breeze to tangle hair…

 

I reminisce, as far above

a whisper of falling in love

danced gracefully in flowery bliss

the sweetest scent upon my wrist

 

A gentle plume to fill the skies

the bluest blue...your lovely eyes

and in your kiss, a warm embrace

to blush my cheeks,

                         I

            still

                      can

                              taste

  

the morning sun and honey dew

tracing the curve of me and you

My heart fluttered…the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

 

Reviews

[Trace]

This is one of the prettiest poems of yours I have read in a long time.
Not that any of your poems are not pretty
But some flow so easily and sound so soft and sensual
When read out loud.

This has . Real feel to it
Like an actual feeling put to verse.

Excellent poetry my dear friend.

HUGGS. . Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean the world to me. Hugs, Julie

[Pash]

This poem is so great, i just feel it in my heart. I keep reading it over and over again and in no time I'll be reciting it

[RED]

What you have written is quite sensational, you made a very good poem!!

Way To Go!, and Keep It Up.

[Elisa]

I love the tenderness and innocence of this poem. I'm not sure if this makes sense, but the image of lace just seems to pervade the words. It has a softness and almost youthful quality to it. So pretty!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful write Julie. Nicely written. :)

[dan]

Julie, thank you for my timely dose of eye-candy love poetry. Usually, in my opinion, a poet is either more proficient in rhyming or non-rhyming verse, rarely both. EX. Poet Robert Frost, much better in his rhyming verse than non-rhyming. You do both so well, it's a gift to those of us who get to read your stream of poetic gems. You're like a rock star of poetry, Julie. I thank you for sharing. take care...dan

[ANTO]

Love is definitely in the air Julie - this is superb. Breathtaking. I was taken deeper and deeper with each reading - beautiful.
"...tracing the curve of me..." - wonderfully sensually descriptive.
:)

[Matching Socks]

Such lovely soft and delicate thoughts and a beautiful flowing gentle rhyme.
Wonderful poem Julie!

[Jamestown]

Beautiful piece of work!, great flow with endless imagery:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chris D.]

I could almost feel the whipsers of that scent upon your wrist pollinating the love you've painted for us all.. Take care of the tips of your fingers, for they're like tiny brushes that bring your emotions to life.. Awesome write my friend!!

[Woody]

aah found a new one: undisputed queen of romance!!
deliciously penned. it warmed the cockles of my heart.

[W R Stowe]

Very nice and descriptive poem of how love blooms in spring but will blossom in the summer