The Days of Spring

~ memories of new love ~

The Days of Spring

 

                                  art ~ Lauri Blank

 

 

A time for love, the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

as tender lace swept meadows fair

upon a breeze to tangle hair…

 

I reminisce, as far above

a whisper of falling in love

danced gracefully in flowery bliss

the sweetest scent upon my wrist

 

A gentle plume to fill the skies

the bluest blue...your lovely eyes

and in your kiss, a warm embrace

to blush my cheeks,

                         I

            still

                      can

                              taste

  

the morning sun and honey dew

tracing the curve of me and you

My heart fluttered…the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

 

Reviews

[Trace]

This is one of the prettiest poems of yours I have read in a long time.
Not that any of your poems are not pretty
But some flow so easily and sound so soft and sensual
When read out loud.

This has . Real feel to it
Like an actual feeling put to verse.

Excellent poetry my dear friend.

HUGGS. . Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean the world to me. Hugs, Julie

[Pash]

This poem is so great, i just feel it in my heart. I keep reading it over and over again and in no time I'll be reciting it

[RED]

What you have written is quite sensational, you made a very good poem!!

Way To Go!, and Keep It Up.

[....................]

A gorgeous piece of springtime poetry that draws one in and sends them down memory lane to think of that perfect moment when new love was born. Beautiful!

[MCS]

Sweet, tender with a lyrical flow, thank you

[Delvin Ashley Draper]

So beautiful, just SO BEAUTIFUL! I read this late at night, and it really put a smile on my face. So romantic. So lovely. Just wonderful.

[Sameer]

Wounderful and romantic, great visual scenes and soothing.. Great work

[sereenaoutloud]

This is stunning! The rhythm and rhyme just flows so beautifully and the layout adds to it all! such a pleasure to read. Going in my library for favs!

[Mai L Nissen]

Every time read your pieces there is always a line of three that makes my body and head unwind and just feel the words, relax, letting heaviness go... In this one, the entire poem had that effect. I read it five times now, did not even really pay attention to the meaning the first three times (not that it is cryptic in any way), I just love how you make a single word, a string of words, language flow so smoothly and accommodating.

I love your work, Julie! :)

[cloakedone]

I think you did a wonderful job,but i think you should of described the lovers as nature themselves.....

[stars are far]

That was very beautiful work done here. i loved this )

[Einstein Noodle]

heavy sigh! ... it flows like rivulets, cascading words, bewitching, willingly under your spell! :) Spring seems slow in coming around my pond .. tho this morning feels a bit more like it .. reading your poem has definitely ushered her in ;)
E.

[~]

Ahhh those butterflies,
on cushioned skies,
keeping our hopes high,
with scattered sighs..
``` sorry couldn't help it. romantic to the core, soft and seductive!