The Days of Spring

~ memories of new love ~

The Days of Spring

 

                                  art ~ Lauri Blank

 

 

A time for love, the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

as tender lace swept meadows fair

upon a breeze to tangle hair…

 

I reminisce, as far above

a whisper of falling in love

danced gracefully in flowery bliss

the sweetest scent upon my wrist

 

A gentle plume to fill the skies

the bluest blue...your lovely eyes

and in your kiss, a warm embrace

to blush my cheeks,

                         I

            still

                      can

                              taste

  

the morning sun and honey dew

tracing the curve of me and you

My heart fluttered…the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing

 

Reviews

[Trace]

This is one of the prettiest poems of yours I have read in a long time.
Not that any of your poems are not pretty
But some flow so easily and sound so soft and sensual
When read out loud.

This has . Real feel to it
Like an actual feeling put to verse.

Excellent poetry my dear friend.

HUGGS. . Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean the world to me. Hugs, Julie

[Pash]

This poem is so great, i just feel it in my heart. I keep reading it over and over again and in no time I'll be reciting it

[RED]

What you have written is quite sensational, you made a very good poem!!

Way To Go!, and Keep It Up.

[MOON]

Simply lyrical beautiful delicate write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words :) Julie

[icelandicblue]

You poem is simply a gorgeous and elegant sensory delight. I felt the warm breeze of your words. Just a lovely lovely piece of writing Jewel.

[R Smith]

has to be one of my favourites of yours and that is saying a lot!

I reminisce, as far above
a whisper of falling in love
danced gracefully in flowery bliss
the sweetest scent upon my wrist

Oh! to be able to taste that scent, I love your rhyme's and it flows like the smoothest cream which of course it is, the cream of the crop, absolute heaven Julie :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

So beautiful, the words, the sound of the words and also the sweet honey meaning of them. Liked it very much, Julie. Very romantic as always. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Rudi :) Julie

[Moonie]

This is so gentle, so lulling and soothing. Your words work marvels, ma'am. You know how to melt the scene into the reader's mind with your words. Mind you, I said "melt" , because that is how it feels. Even though, I may not have seen that particular sight ever in my life, your gentle words make me feel the poem, as if I have been there myself in some dream that I may have forgotten. And that is the reason which compels me to read your poems again and again.

[KelWriter]

This is a timeless peace. I could read this 20 - 30 years from now and go that was a fantastic poem. Thanks so much for sharing this. I hope to write this well one day.

[James]

It is how I remember poetry in lovely books by Steiner Rice.
nicely laid out and pretty. Like a professional !!!

[Avinash]

Delicious amalgam of words..Your command on words and style is remarkable.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
Beautiful.........so sweet and romantic...........
"the morning sun and honey dew

tracing the curve of me and you

My heart fluttered…the days of spring

of butterflies on painted wing"

beautiful write....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is such a beautiful piece. I'm left totally speechless. The comparison and descriptions are awesome and so is the language and choice of words. My favorite part is
"of butterflies on painted wing" Absolutely wonderful. This piece is so filled with the beauty of nature and love. Its tranquilizing. Excellent work. Stay Inspired.