Tonight

~ a romantic scribble ~

art by Thierry

 

 

Tonight…

I’m wrapped in bittersweet nostalgia

searching for words to describe

your sleepy kisses

                                                 on quiet nights

when starlight was the only witness to breathless promises

whispered as tenderly as your touch…

                                            silk to my skin

                                                 warming soft curves

                                  uncovering emotions

I could only dream of capturing

with amethyst skies

                                and silver stars

                                                 and poetic words beating to the sound of my heart

 

So tonight…

as the stars breathe goodnight kisses from a wistful sky

I’ll surrender to dreams of your touch

                                 on quiet nights

                 and forget everything else…

                                                           but you

Reviews

[ANTO]

I dont know how I missed this one Julie. I loved immediately the bubbles filled image - its so playful and sensual, and the way it set the scene.
I see how well you use formatting Julie - this is a masterclass - the way the reader is carried - gently to the next word - the next line. Letting each word settle like a snowflake.
Straight into my library this gorgeous write goes -
:))

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review Anto. You are always so encouraging. I appreciate you! :) julie

[Woody]

julie, I'm out of adjectives to describe your poetry cos I hate to repeat myself.
I said tender, feathery, ethereal, sweet. no, nothing new there. I'll have to take a look at Thesaurus.
you're the queen of romantic writes here.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Woody. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[onceloved]

Your beautiful poetry become intoxicating because you have very poetic heart Julie, thank you for sharing the beautiful side of your talent with all of us again. I always look forward to read the next one my friend. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are welcome again my friend I have enjoy sharing your writing you for five years :)Larry

[....................]

Such eloquent lines describing the most romantic thoughts. "I'll surrender to dreams of your touch" - simply beautiful.

[MsJewel]

thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Valentine]

Soft and very sweet write of longing and remembrance. Brings back memories. Valentine

[MsJewel]

thank you Kathie! :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Gorgeous piece of work, great flow unbelievable word play and a picture
to mirror the beauty of the the piece! I really enjoyed the submission that
was expressed in the write, so sensual and warm, thanks
for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Jamestown]

My pleasure:)