Tonight

~ a romantic scribble ~

art by Thierry

 

 

Tonight…

I’m wrapped in bittersweet nostalgia

searching for words to describe

your sleepy kisses

                                                 on quiet nights

when starlight was the only witness to breathless promises

whispered as tenderly as your touch…

                                            silk to my skin

                                                 warming soft curves

                                  uncovering emotions

I could only dream of capturing

with amethyst skies

                                and silver stars

                                                 and poetic words beating to the sound of my heart

 

So tonight…

as the stars breathe goodnight kisses from a wistful sky

I’ll surrender to dreams of your touch

                                 on quiet nights

                 and forget everything else…

                                                           but you

Reviews

[ANTO]

I dont know how I missed this one Julie. I loved immediately the bubbles filled image - its so playful and sensual, and the way it set the scene.
I see how well you use formatting Julie - this is a masterclass - the way the reader is carried - gently to the next word - the next line. Letting each word settle like a snowflake.
Straight into my library this gorgeous write goes -
:))

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review Anto. You are always so encouraging. I appreciate you! :) julie

[wordman]

dream of your touch,quiet nights soft kisses a gently flow down the path of soft memories

[Coyote Poetry]

It is funny how the sad moment become less painful with distance and time.
"I’ll surrender to dreams of your touch
on quiet nights
and forget everything else…
but you"
In dreams. Love never died or is forgotten. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

I like this. I like the way it flows.
You mentioned quiet nights.... the feel of this is quite amazing for being with the one you love,

[Confuser]

So tonight---and Oh My Goodness: I do not like Britney Spears, but Julie: I think ooops She did it again and I truly wish to thank you....I didn't feel old at all when I read - I’m wrapped in bittersweet nostalgia
searching for words to describe
your sleepy kisses on quiet nights
(I love my husband, but between us two; your word nostalgia hit me & I remember being young and it was quite a kiss)....Ha...I love your writing. Breathless....Big aaws and a sigh to the silvery moon. Thanks so much again!!! Bravo. Dale

[R Smith]

beautiful words, beautiful lines, beautiful poem, as always Julie your work grows and grows with every poem you write, amazing writing :)

[Saddam]

So tonight…
as the stars breathe goodnight kisses from a wistful sky
I’ll surrender to dreams of your touch.

So wonderful words they are.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

*Sigh* A taste of your romantic poetry was what I needed to make my day brighter.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy! :) julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always a pleasure Jules :)

[Ana B.]

beautiful poem making me sigh.....beyond lovely writing :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Ana :) Julie

[sereenaoutloud]

this is beautiful and flows effortlessly , great write !

[MsJewel]

I appreciate your kind words, thanks so much :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

Only you could dream up such a romantic night sky of stars and lights so beautiful and bright it brings such delights to saying good night sweetheart good night.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jim :) Julie