Tonight

~ a romantic scribble ~

art by Thierry

 

 

Tonight…

I’m wrapped in bittersweet nostalgia

searching for words to describe

your sleepy kisses

                                                 on quiet nights

when starlight was the only witness to breathless promises

whispered as tenderly as your touch…

                                            silk to my skin

                                                 warming soft curves

                                  uncovering emotions

I could only dream of capturing

with amethyst skies

                                and silver stars

                                                 and poetic words beating to the sound of my heart

 

So tonight…

as the stars breathe goodnight kisses from a wistful sky

I’ll surrender to dreams of your touch

                                 on quiet nights

                 and forget everything else…

                                                           but you

Reviews

[ANTO]

I dont know how I missed this one Julie. I loved immediately the bubbles filled image - its so playful and sensual, and the way it set the scene.
I see how well you use formatting Julie - this is a masterclass - the way the reader is carried - gently to the next word - the next line. Letting each word settle like a snowflake.
Straight into my library this gorgeous write goes -
:))

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review Anto. You are always so encouraging. I appreciate you! :) julie

[Steve L.]

Damn, I miss your gorgeous writing! I am not on this site much anymore, but reading your work is always an absolute pleasure.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Steve. It's wonderful to see you! :) julie

[Arline]

Like a star shining in the sky this piece has captured my attention XD I find myself falling in love with it as well, great job!

[AaronFreitas]

Damn you write some beautiful poems... I think I fell in love twice reading this poem lol... I loved it :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Aaron :) julie

[MomzillaNC]

Beautiful and ardent :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

yw :D

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You know how to capture the essence of romantic feelings in the written word and to shape them into such beautifully emotional verse. You also have a knack for selecting lovely pictures to accompany your writing Julie.

[Willard Wells]

Well I must say again I bow to you and beyond that I am speechless. Well OK, I'm never speechless, but this piece speaks for itself and for your and your skill with words, thoughts, and feelings.


See what I mean.........................

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous words :) Julie

[blaqpearl]

So tonight…
as the stars breathe goodnight kisses from a wistful sky
I’ll surrender to dreams of your touch
on quiet nights and forget everything else…
but you

something about your poems they are just magical

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... sleepy kisses on quiet nights...
Van Gogh passion in every sigh ... amethyst skies
and silver stars ... Your poetry is timeless and
lovely and soft as a Monet lullaby . truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pat. Happy Easter my dear friend. HUgs, Julie

[Sameer]

Beautiful " as the stars breathe goodnite kisses from a wistful sky" loved it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie