Alighting

~ I'll always be a spring girl ~

 

                                      richard johnson ~ morning blossoms

 

 

Pastel scents and vanilla clouds

and the breeze singing in the sweetest voice…

 

“Come to my window, love

awaken the wildflowers

       for all is new”

 

I run to feel the sun in my hair

the blush on my cheeks

warming my heart

stirring my soul

like a dove...

 

          alighting

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Yes, you're all time 'spring girl'. I've figured that all out through your pages (earlier pages). Appreciate it. The poetry's written with the game of words. Liked how beautifully you compare clouds with "vanilla"; scents with "pastel" (its makes vivid imagery of pastel hues in mind); the shine of hair with "sun-rays"; blush of lips with "heart"... Really enjoyed reading this poetic art. Well written!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

Beautiful thoughts of spring here Julie it bring warmths to my heart and soon flowers to my soul.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jim :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Cute little love poem, Julie. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Rudi :) Julie

[Woody]

I could see this unfold, with my mind's eye. gorgeous!
after months of cold and miserable weather, you come out of your cocoon and spread your wings under the spring sun. I love spring, too.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Woody. Happy Spring my friend :) Julie

[Norah]

How sensational...I enjoyed reading this, beautiful write!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Norah :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

spring alighting like a dove!! i had to stop and imagine that .. what a precious kiss .. i haven't heard the first doves cooing yet but my awareness is now sharpened ... and i will surely think of your poem when i do!! :)
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[MOON]

Yum vanilla clouds , love the last word says it all.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Magical and enchanting romance, Julie. When the breeze sings, it is time to listen. So lovely. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[Ana B.]

What an endearing piece of glittering magic. Absolutely gorgeous write!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Ana :) Julie

[dan]

Aaah, the dove, that bearer of loving feelings springing forth...love the coo coo owl-like sounds in the morning; that is, when they come back here from warmer climes. This reads like a harbinger of spring in the air, a time of rebirth and all things new. Beautiful piece, Julie. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Perhaps that is one of the reasons I love spring so much - everything feels new again.. Thank you for your lovely words my dear friend :) julie

[Mai L Nissen]

Lovely poem, Julie! Made me even more excited about spring's arrival :)
The poem gives the impression of spring waking you up from a slumber...
My favourite lines: "Pastel scents and vanilla clouds
and the breeze singing in the sweetest voice…"
What an alluring description appealing to your senses!

Thank you for sharing :)

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Mai. thank you :) Julie