Silent Dawn

~ just a scribble ~

         

                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

Silence finds me

naked and vulnerable

 

As the morning sun

plays against the white cloud of pillows

protecting my dreams

 

I ache

to feel the warmth of your lips

your taste on mine

as you tattoo your love upon my skin

strewn with fragrant flowers

glistening at your touch

 

How I miss waking up

to the beat of your heart

legs in tangled rapture

                                 secrets

 left exposed to the moonlight

                                                naked and vulnerable

 

                                                                       silence finds me

Reviews

[Trace]

To still feel the longing and loneliness of a lover long gone,
is something only a poet can describe in verse with such beauty, simplicity and grace.

This is sensual, and seductive, yet solemn and tempered with just a hint of wistfulness.

wonderful poetry my friend

Huggs, Trace

[MsJewel]

Your comments mean the world to me Trace. Thank you sweet beast :) Julie

[Elisa]

Excellent job as usual, Julie. Your descriptions pull me right into what the speaker is feeling. I'm in as much pain as she is. You're so good at eliciting emotion from the reader, and I enjoyed every second of this.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Elisa :) Julie

[Mai L Nissen]

A very melancholic poem, the hurt is definitely there, though subtle and silent, it seeps through the lines -
"silence finds me"
I dont' know what else to say. Apparently, silence has found me too!
Thank you for sharing

[MsJewel]

Thank you Mai :) Julie

[Helen Crutchett]

Perfectly beautiful passion and longing in this delicious love write. Well done poetess!

~ Helena ~

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Helena. Thank you :) Julie

[Healing Star]

Silence finds Me
We are left to ourselves at times
To have the time to find Ourselves
Once we do everything changes
We no longer need to long for the one who will complete us
For we in that moment of seeing ourselves
Know we are complete
In the Silence, I finds Me - and I open up Smiling
And a giggle comes up from my toes,
As I realize I have everything
The Longing is over

Completely naked, completely vulnerable
My eyes were opened, and I saw a new Me
Very creative beginning and Ending
My beginnings usually are weak, but I love a strong ending

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words. :) Julie

[Valentine]

A very tender and beautiful write. Another I read with memories dropping in at every word. Valentine

[MsJewel]

Thank you Kathie :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Now this is what I'm talking about!!! Friend if these are just scribbles,
please sign me up for scribbling 101:) I love the wording, so sexy
fallows suite with picture! Going in favorites! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment James :) Julie