Of Wishes...Of Love

~ a romantic scribble ~

                         art by Tomas Rut

 

 

To lay my head a moment ‘pon his chest

a serenade of two hearts intertwined

that takes us far above the restless night

where only heaven waits, we move as one

I’ll count the stars shining in his eyes

and know each wish was only that for love

 

Each breath between us sweet,

                              precious one…

                    hold me close as the night sheds her dew      

 

To wake to pale white lilies standing tall

and buds upon the vine glistening dawn

to catch each falling tear, this dewy morn

silky and soft, yet warm, as he is near

then join him half awake veiled in our dream

where wishes still shine in loving eyes…

Author's Note

art by Tomas Rut
poetry by MsJewel

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"to catch each falling tear, this dewy morn
silky and soft, yet warm, as he is near
then join him half awake veiled in our dream"

Nothing like two hearts intertwined in one dream of eternity and nothing like those eyes shimmering in the precious nights. A wonderful scribble...:)......

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your encouraging words Sami. :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........

[Confuser]

Julie: Of course it's beautiful and so is the art: I love the way the syllables flow too; your usage of language is so impression and heightens the flow: the e's: silky, loving, he, falling, glistening, lillies: the patterns in other areas are beautiful too. Thank you so much. Love it: What a talent you possess. Wow. Dale

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet Dale. Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. You have made my day :) Julie

[Sophy Freebirds]

Geee!! Julie you are making me addicted to love poems.. This is so very romantic i made my very hard cynic soul moan. :p The breathy contentment when to heart fly to the paradise of ecstasy.Nothing absolutely nothing in this earth counts with that.A simple gesture of resting head on his chest speaks volumes of connection you said.And as always breathtaking imagery.. Always a fan :) *keep writing*

~Sophy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words lovely lady :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"the breaths between us" each one felt, each romantic pulse...two are one, under one moonlight.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Valentine]

Far above the restless night where only heaven waits... a beautiful line. You do have a flair for the romantic. Nice write. Valentine

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Kathie :) Julie

[Fran Marie]

Pale white lilies standing tall..you paint a lovely vision here especially..a dreamy piece of poetry exquisitely penned..

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review Fran :) Julie

[Jamestown]

Your create such a beautiful seen in the mind's of the reader, imagery
is fantastic in this piece and wonderful words to match. I remember those
blessed mornings waking to a sliver of heaven beside you.
Another romantic piece, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it sweet friend. :) Julie