Of Wishes...Of Love

~ a romantic scribble ~

                         art by Tomas Rut

 

 

To lay my head a moment ‘pon his chest

a serenade of two hearts intertwined

that takes us far above the restless night

where only heaven waits, we move as one

I’ll count the stars shining in his eyes

and know each wish was only that for love

 

Each breath between us sweet,

                              precious one…

                    hold me close as the night sheds her dew      

 

To wake to pale white lilies standing tall

and buds upon the vine glistening dawn

to catch each falling tear, this dewy morn

silky and soft, yet warm, as he is near

then join him half awake veiled in our dream

where wishes still shine in loving eyes…

Author's Note

art by Tomas Rut
poetry by MsJewel

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"to catch each falling tear, this dewy morn
silky and soft, yet warm, as he is near
then join him half awake veiled in our dream"

Nothing like two hearts intertwined in one dream of eternity and nothing like those eyes shimmering in the precious nights. A wonderful scribble...:)......

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your encouraging words Sami. :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........

[ANTO]

Wow Julie - this is such a sweet write. The longing to be together and be held is so evocative and emotive
"Each breath between us sweet,
precious one…
hold me close as the night sheds her dew .." - pure love from heart to pen - no stops - straight on til romance.
Just gorgeous - my new favourite of yours
thanks for sharing your wonderful romantic heart with us
:))

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Anto. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

"Each breath between us sweet,

precious one…

hold me close as the night sheds her dew"
I especially like those lines .. and it seems the perfect interlude between verses one and three .. such comfort in waking with loving eyes as one .. always the romantic eh!?
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Woody]

deliciously romantic. tender and ethereal.
a magical poem.
those are the only adjectives I can think of for now.

[MsJewel]

They are stunning adjectives Woody. Thank you :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing words for love.
"Each breath between us sweet,
precious one…
hold me close as the night sheds her dew"
The above lines are perfect. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[Mai L Nissen]

You do have quite the talent for seducing the reader into a moment... For me this gave me a sense of calm enchantment, and the feeling of the connection between the two almost creates a protective cloak around them. There is a warmth in your way of expressing yourself that I envy!

"To wake to pale white lilies standing tall
and buds upon the vine glistening dawn
to catch each falling tear, this dewy morn
silky and soft, yet warm,... "

This is a beautiful description.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Mai. :) Julie

[wordman]

a story of two lovers under the stars,touhing catching tears,maing love
in a warm ebrrace making love in a soft passion

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[wordman]

you are welcome,julie

[EdmundLinton]

A beautiful expression for which most of us yearn. Exquisite transfer from thought to page. Edmund

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Edmund. Thank you :) Julie

[onceloved]

Intimacy in a relationship is the process of revealing and offering the soul of yourself to another significant person in your life it is the oxygen of what real love is. And you always do it so beautifully Julie. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you for those wise words Larry :) Julie

[Saddam]

Each breath between us sweet,

precious one…

hold me close as the night sheds her dew

Sweet and Beautiful one as always.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend :) Julie

[Trace]

Well this is just stunning
And it sounds like someone woke up with someone very special.

I just love how you interpret feelings and actions into such beautiful poetry.

HUGGS. .. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean the world to me. Hugs, J