Ideal Rain

Ideal Rain

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a sensual little scribble ~

"

 

 

You shower me with love

                            completely

as rain would a rose

softly,

gently

caressing my skin, silken smooth and glistening

petals quiver,

emotions bloom….clouds are but a whisper

 

In liquid rapture I dissolve…

quenched

© 2015 MsJewel


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dan
A tiny dew drop of printed eye-candy. Clouds whispering (as Jimi Hendrix wrote, "and the wind cried 'mary'" The wind must have whispered your name as you wrote this. Another library's catalog card in the drawer labeled 'Romance.' Another beautiful Julie write. Thanks for sharing with me. take care...dan

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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie



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Nice and smooth showers silky skin Something I would like to get next to someday soon.

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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jim :) Julie
One sensual emotion, very good, Julie. :) Rudi

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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi :) Julie
Lovely, and as the rain touches the rose, it fertilizes the ground to complete life's cycle. Kathie

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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you fo r your lovely comment Kathie :) Julie

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Added on February 25, 2015
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Tags: love, romance, sensual, passion, rain, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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