Ideal Rain

~ a sensual little scribble ~

 

 

You shower me with love

                            completely

as rain would a rose

softly,

gently

caressing my skin, silken smooth and glistening

petals quiver,

emotions bloom….clouds are but a whisper

 

In liquid rapture I dissolve…

quenched

Reviews

[dan]

A tiny dew drop of printed eye-candy. Clouds whispering (as Jimi Hendrix wrote, "and the wind cried 'mary'" The wind must have whispered your name as you wrote this. Another library's catalog card in the drawer labeled 'Romance.' Another beautiful Julie write. Thanks for sharing with me. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Sophy Freebirds]

I am just awed by what you wrote.. I just gazed at the screen for a few seconds to think what to say for this deeply sensuous write..You know how to make the heartbeat of reader race without getting naughty. Thats the class.I had never thought of rain and a blooming flower could be given such a sexy touch.But when it comes to Julie,i guess everything is possible.You have given delicate curves to this wonderful poem i am sure men are gonna salivate :D hah. *Keep writing*

~Sophy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Sophy. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Man you're good at this kind of writing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you BR :) Julie

[ANTO]

i love the way this is laid out - its like a delicate piece of lace-work . The theme - the Life giving water - the love - carried throughout reminds one of those showers - have you ever been caught in one of those rain showers that soaks both of you and you can do nothing but laugh at each other with loving humour?
i loved the phrase 'liquid rapture' Julie...:)
thanks for the RR my friend

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Anto. I appreciate you :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

ok .. confessing the old guy with heart aflutter (not attack) .. makes me think of something i can put under the tongue and feel the heat .. however can not escape the thought of hard driving .. wind whipping .. salt spray waves of ...... :)
E.

[MsJewel]

I'm glad I could get your heart fluttering my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Confuser]

Julie: You are going to absolutely give some of these old guys here a heart attack!!! Oh my - it is riveting! I read one of your gorgeous poem leave with a sigh, saying to myself no way can she do better; how unreal and here again quietly lovely, peaceful & brilliant. Bravo!

[MsJewel]

No heart attacks...just some heart flutters...thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Confuser]

Same back at you!!!! So sweet of you to say - I'm smiling like a baboon.

[ron]

OMG you made my heart beat with this one Julie. Such passion and love. I think I am close to tears.

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Ron. Thank you :) Julie

[ron]

You are most welcome Julie :)

[onceloved]

Very sensual leaves a lot to the imagination it was so beautifully penned I love the first paragraph it was so beautiful. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

Your Welcome Julie. :) Larry

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
sensual smooth like rose petals.......
i loved it!!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :)Julie

[Saddam]

You shower me with love
completely.............

A complete piece of romance. Loved it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie