Ideal Rain

~ a sensual little scribble ~

 

 

You shower me with love

                            completely

as rain would a rose

softly,

gently

caressing my skin, silken smooth and glistening

petals quiver,

emotions bloom….clouds are but a whisper

 

In liquid rapture I dissolve…

quenched

Reviews

[dan]

A tiny dew drop of printed eye-candy. Clouds whispering (as Jimi Hendrix wrote, "and the wind cried 'mary'" The wind must have whispered your name as you wrote this. Another library's catalog card in the drawer labeled 'Romance.' Another beautiful Julie write. Thanks for sharing with me. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Trace]

This is simple and simply beautiful.
Sounds like a poem from a woman in love.

Your words flow so softly and smoothly as the gentle rain on the roses.

Wonderful poetry.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Well there you are....I was wondering if you were ever going to leave the mine and play with me!!! Miss you sweet beast! :) Julie

[....................]

"In liquid rapture I dissolve.../quenched" - a rapturous line to end an enraptured poem. I love the image of rain showering the rose and the quiver of its petals. Sensual! Thanks for sharing. - FT

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

I love the way your write so sensuous and romantic, yet so delicate. Your prose is never heavy handed.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely compliment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

yvw :)

[Sami Khalil]

Your words are ideal for any romance and your whispers dissolve the morning dew...Excellent...:).........

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami! :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

[Justin Xavier Smith]

I love this! Really well written, and captures the essence of exactly what you're going for. Well done!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Justin :) Julie

[Mai L Nissen]

Wow! I am not usually so fond of metaphors that include roses, but this description is captivating! With an understated sensuous feel

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Mai. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[J. K. Beach]

MsJewel,

I do believe, if I smoked, I'd be lighting one just about now and sighing contentedly... such a lovely picture you paint with your words! They are a welcome fire on a cold winter's day...

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thanks so much :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You have combined two of my favorite things, rain and romance, Oh Julie all I can do is sigh.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy. It's always a pleasure when you visit my page! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always a pleasure to stop by your page.

[Roshan Nair]

I am clueless as to how each time you can emote so much with sensuous passion as the theme. Great write julie... I love the way you used the clever imagery to emphasize the poetic power of the piece. cheers :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Roshan :) Julie

[Woody]

gosh what a finish!! in liquid rapture I dissolve, quenched.
superb as usual, Julie.

[MsJewel]

thank you Woody :) Julie