Ideal Rain

~ a sensual little scribble ~

 

 

You shower me with love

                            completely

as rain would a rose

softly,

gently

caressing my skin, silken smooth and glistening

petals quiver,

emotions bloom….clouds are but a whisper

 

In liquid rapture I dissolve…

quenched

Reviews

[dan]

A tiny dew drop of printed eye-candy. Clouds whispering (as Jimi Hendrix wrote, "and the wind cried 'mary'" The wind must have whispered your name as you wrote this. Another library's catalog card in the drawer labeled 'Romance.' Another beautiful Julie write. Thanks for sharing with me. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Steve L.]

Yummy!!! Rain is my absolute favorite weather phenomenon...

Very sensual it is...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie ... your pen is dipped in the
golden fires of desire. Rain on Rose petals
softly yearning to be kissed by heavenly
angel lips. Romantic overtures of quiet
waves on an ocean blue. truly... Pat

[Stephen]

Oh these scribbles!!
Hell, you freaking tricking so fricking "Lady Of France, I must label you with a word that belongs to "Goddess Of Romance". I`m sure, you love this mononymous (name) that i`ve crowned you with. It even praises your hotness as well as the talent you`ve got in the reddish peddish palm of your bare-naked hands. Hell, even the rain becomes cold.. & the fire more hot just having your creative artistry around the arena of this wicked wild & wide globe.

The choice of words's all what I find the best of best in your stuffs which make your persona more killer to be breathed... with love. The rain has got its own 'worth' amid the realm of romantic skies and dark and desperate clouds so, I think, you have made a very unique composition of 'rain' and 'love' with the glory of your magnified 'Romance'.
My words: Rain brings real nice (true) lovers more close to each others & allow them to go emerged into each other.. with the echo of cold winds blown off by the sighs of rain... to hearts. And... I find these all bountiful things in your write. Sounds pretty good. Keep it up!

[Isabella Disney]

Wow! A very sense invoking piece of work! Its lovely, thank you so much. The last word is what really gets me.. "quenched" ... it perfectly sums up the short beauty.
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you foryour kind words :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such beauty within this piece. :)

[Ana B.]

Absolutely magical and oh so tempting.....a silky feeling....very amazing piece....i'm a fan :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ana :) Julie

[William S]

Sensual to the core.A beautiful look at love and the very essence of it.Shine on Julie,William

[nazia]

what a beautiful description of the joy of being loved.. amazing work :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words. :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. I believe in the logic of love is like a garden. Need to be caressed, protected and watered with tenderness. Photo and words. A perfect journey into rapture and great pleasure. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my dear friend.
Coyote.

[MsJewel]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Julie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"in liquid rapture i dissolve"
love that line...
yes, this is the best kind of rain...the rain of love.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[R Smith]

stunning!! library!! your personal shelf of course, its gorgeous from the shower to the quenched, almost a little naughty there i thought, your very words are a caress to the heart, just magic as always Julie :)

[MsJewel]

A little naughty can be a little nice...I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Richard. :) Julie