In Rhythm

~ a little love scribble ~

Art ~ Hamish Blakely ~ dreamers

 

 

~~~

It is you that quickens the beat of my heart

that paints my eyes with beauty each dawn of our day

and sweetens my dreams as night sheds her dew

our breathing, in rhythm, perfect harmony

 

Graceful are lovers who dance cheek to cheek

in sunlight, in moonlight, enthralled in the song

that lingers so softly when joined together

and echoes in heartbeats when far apart…

 

Never to fade, as time stalls in rapture

of our love, in rhythm, perfect harmony

~~~

Reviews

[B-poet]

This poem reminds me of the graciousness evolved with every tango that commences on the dance floor. A wonderful write Julie. Your picture evokes the essence of two kindred souls who're in sync with each others dancing heartbeat's. An eloquent & divine read. :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you for your wonderful review. :) Julie

[dan]

Julie, Your gift for writing romantic poetry is amazing, the images described always in sync with the dreamy rhythm of the piece written. BTW, I've sent you at least one RR that you either read and didn't like or didn't read. Make no mistake, though, this one is a polished gem or a write. Well done! take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate you and your friendship. I haven't made it through all my rr's this weekend, but I will definitely look for yours! Thanks for the heads up! :) Julie

[Lizardo]

I do enjoy your romantic poems, they have this thing that makes you enjoy them
Beautiful poem!

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Lizardo - thank you :) Julie

[TheLostMind]

"Never to fade, as time stalls in rapture". I have to confess, your elegant and delicate poems do bring about the same effect. Time will be left in awe by the tranquility of your words. It will stall, each line bringing intense pleasure.

As always, another breathtaking poem Julie. Great job :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) Julie

[TheLostMind]

You are welcome :)

[Gee]

You do write so beautifully,I often read but do not comment because invariably all has already been said.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Gee]

My pleasure

[onceloved]

Beautiful little scribble gem you have there.." save the last dance for me" :) Larry

[MsJewel]

I'll do that Larry, but you have to start posting here at WC and leave that plagiarizing, anti-social site you keep posting at. Why keep supporting those that don't care about the art of poetry - they care more about their egos! Hugs, Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wish this kind of feeling would stay...relationships often start out with such a romantic dance, but then later end up with one or both partners "sitting this one out."
nicely done.

[MsJewel]

I wish the feeling would stay as well, but it is rare...
Thanks so much Jacob :) Julie

[Trace]

This is really incredible.
I was expecting a rhyming poem
But didnt notice that it didnt until after reading the second verse.
however the rhythm is spot on...

And it is so dam sensual and sweet,,,,,
I just love it.

So nice.

Trace.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. This one started out as a sextilla, but the rhymes seemed forced so I scrapped it - as I often do - and just wrote from my heart - you know, with Valentines Day around the corner and all that jazz. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Your opinion means so much to me. LY J

[redzone]

the beauty of dancing lovers, captured wonderfully in your poem Julie.. it's a treat to read and feel this 'harmony'...
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you Curt! :) Julie

[Saddam]

So rhythmic and musical write.
So nice as always.

that paints my eyes with beauty each dawn of our day
and sweetens my dreams as night sheds her dew

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Jamestown]

So beautiful, this write also had perfect rhythm. I always enjoy reading your work
Thanks for sharing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie