In Rhythm

~ a little love scribble ~

Art ~ Hamish Blakely ~ dreamers

 

 

~~~

It is you that quickens the beat of my heart

that paints my eyes with beauty each dawn of our day

and sweetens my dreams as night sheds her dew

our breathing, in rhythm, perfect harmony

 

Graceful are lovers who dance cheek to cheek

in sunlight, in moonlight, enthralled in the song

that lingers so softly when joined together

and echoes in heartbeats when far apart…

 

Never to fade, as time stalls in rapture

of our love, in rhythm, perfect harmony

~~~

Reviews

[B-poet]

This poem reminds me of the graciousness evolved with every tango that commences on the dance floor. A wonderful write Julie. Your picture evokes the essence of two kindred souls who're in sync with each others dancing heartbeat's. An eloquent & divine read. :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you for your wonderful review. :) Julie

[W R Stowe]

Its always nice when you have that special one that you literally melt together.That is real rhythm very nice Julie'

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[W R Stowe]

Your welcome Julie

Bill

[MomzillaNC]

Brilliant romantic poetry -- but then, I would expect nothing less from you. You really are a romantic voice of our times.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[~]

A dashing romantic verse dear Julie! May your pen always keep up with the yearning of your heart!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie

[R Smith]

Brilliant as usual Julie with one of the best stanza's i have ever read, (that's the first one) your writing continues to grow in grace and beauty, just so lovely, thank you :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

Never to fade, as time stalls in rapture

of our love, in rhythm, perfect harmony
💕💕💕💕💕💕🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆

[MsJewel]

Thank you Manal :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

your poetry of this nature always serves to remind me how important it is to keep love alive .. so i think of my Norma as the night is coaxed by the dawn .. and you have a strong sense of form and rhythm .. another beauty MsJ.
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

The romance you find within yourself finds a dance mirrored in your soul.

Regards,
Al

[MsJewel]

Your review is beautiful poetry my friend. :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh what can I say about this romantic stimulant… oh yes "Sigh"

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure sweet Julie.

[Roshan Nair]

Never to fade, as time stalls in rapture
of our love, in rhythm, perfect harmony

these lines have captured so much passion and energy in them yet giving a sense of ease in the minds of lovers..I admire how you paint passion through your words julie.
Great work indeed! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your generous comment Roshan. :) Julie