Dangerous ~ a MsJewel and Trace collaboration

~ having a little fun with my best friend Trace ~

 

 

 

Dangerous

Part 1 ~ The Lady

 

I let him drive my car…

 

Top down, 4^th gear

hair, teased by the wind

as he takes the curves on Pacific Coast Highway

a little faster than is comfortable

smiling…that smile

 

Weak knees, blushing cheeks…

I try my best to concentrate on the moonlight

peeking through the clouds,

shimmering off the tide

                   in a sea of liquid light

the long stretch of deserted sand

beckoning moonlit paradise

              for lovers

strolling hand in hand

 

My head screams slow down

but the words are lost

in the beat of my heart,

                  racing

the butterflies in my stomach,

                              fluttering

my hand trembling as I reached for his

 

Without a word, he stops the car

taking my hand, kissing it gently

smiling…that smile

                             yes,

                                      it was then I knew

…..he’s dangerous

         

 

 

Dangerous,

Part 2 ~ The Gentleman

 

                 I want to go for a ride…

 

Will you drive?

 

I held her door, as she slid into the soft leather seat

handing me her keys

 

But was it the cut of her dress

or the demure pause

that made me hesitate

Oh, yes….

the exposed thigh for my admiration

 

So.... "she’ll let me drive "

I thought, as I started the car

“I’ve got this.”

 

Sure,  she knows how to drive this little German

and she looks “so fine”, her long blonde hair,

this shiny black convertible

 

But does she know what this little thing can do?

Does she know that I do know how to drive it,

to its limits?

 

The P.C.H. rolls out before us

as the moonlight beckons lovers to the beach

I see her exhilaration and anxiety

with every turn and every run through the gears

faster

and harder

I take control,

and enjoy the view

 

Excitement radiates from her fingers

as she pushes her nails into my hand

I slow this marvelous machine

to see the fire in her eyes

her breasts rising with every breath

 

The smile and nervous laugh makes me wonder

was it the driving….or the driver?

as I kiss her hand

I think to myself

…she’s dangerous

 

But….

I’ve got this

  

Author's Note

Art ~ by Rob Hefferan "Romance Series"
Poetry ~ by MsJewel and Trace

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my, i am reminded of those nights on Briggs Street, the old dirt road when we used to park and make out---
How far was the destination, how far were we allowed to drive?
and how far would she stay riding shotgun ---in the backseat of teen passion.

[MsJewel]

I'm glad this one brought back good memories Jacob. Thank you :) Julie

[Falcon1]

I can Imagine a shine on a convertible flying down the road with someone having leather glovers on their fingertips.

[Jon Roggie]

Finally stumbled across this. Love the change of personalities. Setting gives a chance of additional beauty.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous words.

[Isabella Disney]

Wow, this gave me shivers! Love how intense this feels to read. Love the layout too!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this. Thanks so much :)

[Steve L.]

Great collab!!

An intense experience told through the eyes of both partners...

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words. A amazing journey. This is outstanding poetry. I had to read twice. The good description made the photo come to life.
Coyote

[Avinash]

A perfect collab and also the presentation. Congrats to both of you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

Wow... Love in the fast lane .... A woman's body is
made for thrills... The driver sends chills ... You are
both dangerous! as ever... Pat

[MsJewel]

thank you pat! :) julie

[onceloved]

Your collaboration with Trace speak volumes how beautifully you two work together. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

I have always enjoy your collaboration with Trace for the last five years and you are welcome Julie.

[Tiana]

Wow! I loved it! You both got this down to perfection! The vivid images, the artwork, so beautifully presented. Beautifully written, Julie and Trace! :))

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovelycomment :) Julie