Night Whispers

~ a romantic sonnet ~

 

photo compliments of pinterest

 

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Visions are adrift in romantic skies

sparked with tenderness, breathless are my sighs

warmed in amethyst, starlight and moonbeams

soft as whisper, drifting towards my dreams

 

Captivating me with the loveliness

and the elegance of dreams softly dressed

only in your love…oh sweet fantasy

hypnotizing yes…mesmerizing me

 

Floating on a breeze, ruffling tender lace

taking me at once to that secret place

where we will linger in the dark of night

soft as a whisper until dawns first light

 

Romance fills the night, starlight and moonbeams

soft as a whisper drifting towards my dreams

~~~~~

Reviews

[ANTO]

Oh my the longing in this Julie is so intense - how can one pen such a write and still stay on this planet - I imagine your heart and soul were stretched to the stars as this one flowed out. Its gorgeous and the sonnet form takes it to another dimension.
Phewww - I think my boiler thermostat has failed again - is anyone else hot in here??

[MsJewel]

Sending you a little heat from sunny Southern California my sweet friend. :) Julie

[ANTO]

always welcome some Californian rays Julie - thank you
:))

[dan]

Julie, It's funny, I was just tapping out a few words to remember, because I was planning to write something about whispers. I must say that your write is simply lovely, a love poem in the classic sense. This should be in a Hallmark card, and I do mean that as a compliment. Great work here. BTW, may I ask what your username was on Starlite? Have a great night. take care...dan

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment. My username at Starlite was Msjewel. I left there a little over a year ago with Trace, Lydi, Wordman, and a few others.

[onceloved]

Once again the windows of your soul express so beautifully your thoughts and feeling you hold for someone fulfilled with stolen moments and sighs too. Your graphic always go so beautifully with your writing. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

:) You are more than welcome Julie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i just turned my heat up in the house before i read this...now i have to turn it down...scorching...

and a nice pic of charlize...to accompany the words...very romantic as you do so well.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

Your writes truly drift us toward your dreams, your secret places of the heart and your elegance dressed in moonbeams. Another wonderful one...:)..........

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................