Night Whispers

~ a romantic sonnet ~

 

photo compliments of pinterest

 

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Visions are adrift in romantic skies

sparked with tenderness, breathless are my sighs

warmed in amethyst, starlight and moonbeams

soft as whisper, drifting towards my dreams

 

Captivating me with the loveliness

and the elegance of dreams softly dressed

only in your love…oh sweet fantasy

hypnotizing yes…mesmerizing me

 

Floating on a breeze, ruffling tender lace

taking me at once to that secret place

where we will linger in the dark of night

soft as a whisper until dawns first light

 

Romance fills the night, starlight and moonbeams

soft as a whisper drifting towards my dreams

~~~~~

Reviews

[ANTO]

Oh my the longing in this Julie is so intense - how can one pen such a write and still stay on this planet - I imagine your heart and soul were stretched to the stars as this one flowed out. Its gorgeous and the sonnet form takes it to another dimension.
Phewww - I think my boiler thermostat has failed again - is anyone else hot in here??

[MsJewel]

Sending you a little heat from sunny Southern California my sweet friend. :) Julie

[ANTO]

always welcome some Californian rays Julie - thank you
:))

[wordman]

this is certainly a beautiful love poem Julie

[MsJewel]

I'm glad you enjoyed it Ron. Thanks so much :) Julie

[R Smith]

Library!! There that's that out of the way, again i say the most beautiful and romantic writer in this Cafe, thank you Julie :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Richard. I appreciate you. :) Julie

[R Smith]

you are very welcome :)

[Dara]

I literally felt tingles run through my body reading this one, Julie. So sweet, so romantic, so you :-) Just beautiful!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend! :) julie

[Saddam]

Floating on a breeze, ruffling tender lace
taking me at once to that secret place.

Floating me very secretly, Love this.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Saddam]

You are most welcome dear.

[Lizardo]

Wow this is yet another amazing poem from you
It is true that a night with probably stars is a romantic place to be in
Good poem!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[willweb]

A beautiful sonnet Julie. I have always loved this for of poetry and you do it so well. To find true romance, I never have to look further than your page.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Will. This is one of my favorite forms as well :) Julie

[Tiana]

Gorgeous writing, Julie! Flows smoothly-- it oozes of love and romance ... beautifully written :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Tiana]

You are so welcome :)

[AprilRN1210]

sometimes the softness sweeps sweetly towards those starlight sanctuaries and sometimes those waves crash upon the shore taking passion as roughly as it gives.. both are as heavenly as the enchanting emotions you have expressed here.. the flow floated us away on those hypnotizing whispers promising dreamy nights and warm tender loving.. breathtaking as usual, Julie..

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely review April :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

I just always wind up with a dreamy smile on my face when I read your beautiful little romantic scribbles Julie. So lovely and warm.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ana :) Julie

[Valentine]

Do you know what your poems do to us? They are so sensual and seem to float from line to line. The pictures add to the feelings you write. Lovely poem. Kathie

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Kathie. Thank you :) Julie