Night Whispers

~ a romantic sonnet ~

 

photo compliments of pinterest

 

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Visions are adrift in romantic skies

sparked with tenderness, breathless are my sighs

warmed in amethyst, starlight and moonbeams

soft as whisper, drifting towards my dreams

 

Captivating me with the loveliness

and the elegance of dreams softly dressed

only in your love…oh sweet fantasy

hypnotizing yes…mesmerizing me

 

Floating on a breeze, ruffling tender lace

taking me at once to that secret place

where we will linger in the dark of night

soft as a whisper until dawns first light

 

Romance fills the night, starlight and moonbeams

soft as a whisper drifting towards my dreams

~~~~~

Reviews

[ANTO]

Oh my the longing in this Julie is so intense - how can one pen such a write and still stay on this planet - I imagine your heart and soul were stretched to the stars as this one flowed out. Its gorgeous and the sonnet form takes it to another dimension.
Phewww - I think my boiler thermostat has failed again - is anyone else hot in here??

[MsJewel]

Sending you a little heat from sunny Southern California my sweet friend. :) Julie

[ANTO]

always welcome some Californian rays Julie - thank you
:))

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

The journey through this lady hearth was exciting. Woman feelings are the food of the poet. Is a beauty poem, with a wonderful use of the verbs. Is metric beauty.

I love your style on writing. I will be following your talent.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words. :) Julie

[Rewel Acosta Rivera]

Than you, for share your talent!.

[Whispers From The Mind]

very well written. it was a lovely read. thank you for writing it.

[MsJewel]

thank you :) Julie

[Trace]

I recall when we used to write a lot in this form,
but you do it so much better than I.

Still, It is such a lovey poem, and it does bring back very fond memories.

Huggs, Trace

[MsJewel]

I think I taught you this form...and if i remember correctly yours would beat mine in challenges...so I think yours are better. Hugs, J

[Lydia Shutter]

A glorious love sonnet, Julie! You write these so effortlessly! Strong romantic longing in every line. Great work. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

thank you Lydi! :) Julie

[Cassy Sandow]

The image i get from the just the first two lines are unbelievable. Beautiful piece of work

[MsJewel]

thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Chuba kichu]

A strong spicy romantic piece it is. I'm carried away. God Bless.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. thanks so much :) Julie

[leppero]

grand job here, miss. again, some wonderful images weaved through, I think the A- B ryhme scheme works very well, kinda old school love poem. great stuff, miss. fair play

[MsJewel]

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie

[rudelizard]

Passionate and seductive. Beautifully crafted sonnet MsJewel. I really enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more of your work.

[MomzillaNC]

So romantic and filled with longing and expectation…

[Coyote Poetry]

A gentle and beautiful journey in your poetry.
"Floating on a breeze, ruffling tender lace
taking me at once to that secret place
where we will linger in the dark of night
soft as a whisper until dawns first light"
Floating, whispers and tender lace. Fun filled places and thoughts leaving us with the need to re-do the dance. Thank you dear Julie for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote