Gold

~ a love poem ~

 

                          Love is the only gold….Lord Alfred Tennyson

 

               

                               art ~ Gold Diamond by Ron DiScenza

 

 

You wake me from my dreams as I glide

in shadows of the moon where I hide

I feel you reach for me, your embrace

lifts me to another time and place

 

Where you can feel my warmth, soft yet bold

as painted brilliance sweeps and unfolds

scenes created in light just for you

glistening in the pearls of morning dew

 

Weaving silken ribbons beauty flies

feel my touch, take my kiss as I rise

We are free, we are one, we are art

intertwined with each beat of my heart

 

Every breath taken, love, we will share

the beauty that is you I compare

to the sky shining bright, in your hold

I am dawn, the sunrise...I am gold

                                 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

This one was quite magical.. it combined imagery and emotion..sensations... freeing the spirit and allowing it to get lost in the warming light of love.. shining gold like the treasure that it is.. I love it when an author can make me forget I am reading and transport me into another dimension, or state of awareness... you have done that exquisitely here Julie.. for one breathtaking moment, I felt the beat of your heart and it was stunning.. I loved this..

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[TheLostMind]

I will never get tired of saying this.. So beautiful.. So elegant... You have just put a smile on my face..

"Weaving silken ribbons beauty flies
feel my touch, take my kiss as I rise
We are free, we are one, we are art
intertwined with each beat of my heart" - Wow.

Another exquisite write Julie.. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words. :) Julie

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful as ever and would be surprised if it was otherwise. Very good, Julie. Like the golden girl too. :) Rudi

[MsJewel]

Thank you Rudi! :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

wow!!!!
amazing.......
"Every breath taken, love, we will share

the beauty that is you I compare

to the sky shining bright, in your hold

I am dawn, the sunrise...I am gold"

these lines took the already amazing poem to a level of more awesomeness!!!
i loved it Mam!!!
:)

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your generous comment. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome Mam!! :) :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I feel like I am repeating myself,,, but damn your romantic thoughts are boundless, and that is a beautiful thing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my lovely friend! :) Julie

[Lizardo]

Wow, this is truel remarkable, I do love a lot his poem and the ending line gives it a nice and enjoyable ending.
Great piece of work!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

[Valentine]

Very sweet and romantic. You made me miss my husband even more than usual. Love is a precious that many pass over for infatuation. Not knowing around the corner there might be someone who responds like this write. Beautiful..Kathie

[MsJewel]

Thank you Kathie :) julie

[MomzillaNC]

I agree with Ana B. This is a masterpiece of romantic poetry. Brilliant lines, again so indicative of the beautiful, sensual, gentle touch of your poet's voice.

[MsJewel]

Thank your for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

You're very welcome.

[Ana B.]

Outstanding, romantic, sensual, and compelling. A masterpiece :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Ana. Thank you :) Julie

[R Smith]

goes without saying in my library, you struck pure gold with this, the last stanza pure heaven, your work is beyond beauty its from here to Nirvana, Bliss, Heaven, ok i'm going way over the top but you're writing is worth it :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Rana]

Dipped in the golden brilliance of love, this poem drips beauty. The way it ends is wondrous and so also the rhymes that flow totally naturally with each line.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie