Gold

~ a love poem ~

 

                          Love is the only gold….Lord Alfred Tennyson

 

               

                               art ~ Gold Diamond by Ron DiScenza

 

 

You wake me from my dreams as I glide

in shadows of the moon where I hide

I feel you reach for me, your embrace

lifts me to another time and place

 

Where you can feel my warmth, soft yet bold

as painted brilliance sweeps and unfolds

scenes created in light just for you

glistening in the pearls of morning dew

 

Weaving silken ribbons beauty flies

feel my touch, take my kiss as I rise

We are free, we are one, we are art

intertwined with each beat of my heart

 

Every breath taken, love, we will share

the beauty that is you I compare

to the sky shining bright, in your hold

I am dawn, the sunrise...I am gold

                                 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

This one was quite magical.. it combined imagery and emotion..sensations... freeing the spirit and allowing it to get lost in the warming light of love.. shining gold like the treasure that it is.. I love it when an author can make me forget I am reading and transport me into another dimension, or state of awareness... you have done that exquisitely here Julie.. for one breathtaking moment, I felt the beat of your heart and it was stunning.. I loved this..

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Woody]

exquisite! what else? superb wording.
queen of romance, jewel of the Cafe.

[Moonie]

Wonderful images you've bottled in this poem, Julie ma'am!! :) My favourite lines would be
"Weaving silken ribbons beauty flies
feel my touch, take my kiss as I rise
We are free, we are one, we are art
intertwined with each beat of my heart"...

[blaqpearl]

Every breath taken, love, we will share
the beauty that is you I compare
to the sky shining bright, in your hold
I am dawn, the sunrise...I am gold

simply amazing....beautifully expressed...

[Fran Marie]

We are free. We are One..we are art..love is art ..I've always felt that way about it.a beautiful piece here..wonderfully written...on my phone excuse spellingmitskes

[Tiana]

Absolutely beautiful! Simply breathtaking, Julie :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful expression of love Julie. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ana! :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are an artist when it comes to expressing your thoughts and deep feelings someone who is always in your thoughts and who is the dreams you dream. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[onceloved]

You are welcome my friend. :) Larry

[Trace]

A more traditional rhyme pattern
Reminds me of some of your earlier work.

Still very pretty and descriptive in its beauty.

Trace

[MsJewel]

I'm kinda a traditional kind of girl Trace...(stop laughing). I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

Oh thank you ma'am.

[Lydia Shutter]

Romantic couplets caressing the reader with loveliness. Yes, love is an art...and those who are the true artists benefit the most. The rhyming is flawless, helping the words flow. Beautifully said, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Lydi. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[ANTO]

"I feel you reach for me, " - this really spoke to me Julie - that 'feeling' that they are there and the way this phrase conveys it - so much more dreamlike than 'you reach for me'. Class

"I am gold" = I am become love itself (when in your embrace) = utterly divine sentiments.
this is pure romance. Blissful.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous comment :) Julie