Had The Sun Not Set

~ would have, could have...should have? ~

photo compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set

Reviews

[Trace]

The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

[MsJewel]

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read moreLay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...
Ok...yours is prettier. Hugs, J

[Trace]

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress

[armin]

Beautiful wordings, I completely enjoyed it.
Nice job.

armin. ...

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Jamestown]

I thought, it was well written and could feel the I wish feeling it had.

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for your kind words :) Julie