Had The Sun Not Set

~ would have, could have...should have? ~

photo compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Yes, we would have kissed

if he had been mine…

 

In Augusts’ warm mist

when ripe on the vine

were strawberries sweet

and luscious to lips

just longing to meet

in soft little sips

 

The sun was a fire

through clouds of whip cream

‘til fervent desire

in a sky of dreams

faded into the mist

of twilights soft threat

 

Yes, we would have kissed

had the sun not set

Reviews

[Trace]

The kiss that never happened, but was oh so wanted,
and more than likely by both.....

One never knows when the opportunity may arise again,
don't let it pass by without exploring the possibilities.

The softest expression
of love is felt
when wanting lips
together melt.

XOXO ;}
Trace

[MsJewel]

Lay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...read moreLay with me dear
upon the grass
lend me your lips
and I'll pinch your a*s...
Ok...yours is prettier. Hugs, J

[Trace]

Only if you are wearing your red heals and black dress

[andrew mitchell]

It’s a thin line between being hesitant and experiencing immense joy, often or not missing out , you just want to kick yourself for not

[MsJewel]

So true Andrew - so true :) Julie

[ROXANE DORSEY]

A kiss very much saves the day. thanks for sharing this nice poem.

[lenabean]

Fantastic and unique rhymes!! I love this :)

[Roland Petrov]

Luscious with longing. You have a definite rhyming scheme, and yet it takes a back seat to your chosen words and phrases. But shouldn't it be "whipped" instead of "whip"? Trust me to focus in on that one!

[Coyote Poetry]

Those kisses not attempted. Leave us wishing for long days and embrace.
"Yes, we would have kissed
had the sun not set"
The mystery of things not finished leave us yearning for a second chance. Thank you dear Julie for your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Isabella Disney]

Awesome work! Such a delicate moment you have captured here

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Roshan Nair]

This piece is so lighthearted to read but yet so potent in what emotion it carries ! great work

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Avinash]

So many unrealized dreams reflect from your words in quite beautiful way.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Avinash :) Julie

[Saddam]

But there be a kiss, the sun is warmth as breath and wind is as fast as our desire.
This is so beautiful.

The sun was a fire
through clouds of whip cream

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) julie

[Gee]

Ah,if only.A most agreeable read my dear,spiffing.(that's my luvvie review)Enjoyed the poem,great flow and rhyming