Falling...

~ just a scribble ~

 

         

                   photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

If I were a raindrop would you catch me

would you hold me and not let me go

‘til dark skies that shuddered with lightning

                     would brighten

                                 painting rainbows

 

Kissing the sky like a sweet dream

                 where whip cream

                        clouds will be found…

 

If I were a raindrop

                        would you catch me

or would you let me fall to the ground?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

vignettes of love from MsJewel ..absolutely beautiful ... your poem put me in the picture .. i am the picture .. kissing the sky in gentle rain .. so delightful, sensual and selfless in love .. i must put this one in the ol' library for sure .. such a pleasant enjoyable read!!
E.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

I would catch you and never let you go this I do know. Sweet poem Let it rain let it rain Let it rain down on me.

[MsJewel]

thank you Jim :) Julie

[Lizardo]

Aw this poem is really good!
what I really liked about it is the last stanza
''If I were a raindrop
Would you catch me
Or would you let me fall to the ground?''
We are so delicate, delicate like raindrop that can quickly turn to nothing
Amain piece of work

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. thanks so much :) Julie

[Moonie]

I like the symbolism. You can spin and weave the words so well. I'm truly impressed, ma'am!!! I love the whip cream comparison....:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for kind words :) Julie

[Trace]

I would catch you on my tongue and swallow you up
Just so I could experience the sweetness of your essence.

Love this.

Trace

[MsJewel]

A sweet little response - but then again, you are a sweet beast. Love you. Julie

[Des]

Your writing is so beautiful , I love the poem. The last line was just perfection!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"i'd catch you and gently set you down"

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob! :) julie

[Gee]

If you were a raindrop I'd catch you,
a droplet to cherish and love,
your beauty I'd savour forever,
and then in the heavens above.

Was this the reply you received?????

[MsJewel]

No reply yet...but yours would be a lovely one :) Julie

[Gee]

It will come,patience.......

[wordman]

I would catch that raindrop and hold it tight
hold it till the morning light great write great graphics

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[wordman]

you are welcome

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Romantic poetry at its finest. I love youruse of raindrops as a symbol for falling for someone.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Cowboy! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always a pleasure sweets.

[Sami Khalil]

He should be honored and rushing to do that. A sweet treat with lovely romantic imagery...Bravo...............................

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)......................