Aglow

~ a little love scribble ~

art ~ Svetlana Valueva

 

 

 

~~~

Outside a chill is falling

pale in the winter snow

from where I am my darling

springtime is aglow

the vines are intertwining

with buds ready to bloom

while my heartbeat is climbling

left breathless in this room

to wait for your voice calling

with the passion I know

will have my petals falling 

‘til springtime is aglow

~~~

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Your artwork supports this poem with a scene of love and joy.

[B]

Stunning ......................

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet lady :) Julie

[Roshan Nair]

Lovely write julie :) I really enjoy the tenderness and intensity of passion that you play with together in each write. its amazing. cheers!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend Cheers! :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Springtime is glowing like crazy in this poem. Great work Jewel

[MsJewel]

Thank you BR! :) Julie

[Ana B.]

Gorgeous and spellbound. A real piece of magic :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you Ana :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

the vines are intertwining
with buds ready to bloom
while my heartbeat is climbling
left breathless in this room

to wait for your voice calling
with the passion I know

These were the nicest lines 💗
Very nice title too,btw!:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Avinash]

Very beautiful and enchanting words. An apt ode to the magical turn of the weather.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Avinash :) Julie

[Saddam]

to wait for your voice calling
with the passion I know
will have my petals falling
‘til springtime is aglow.

I am fascinated.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[redzone]

hmmm you say "scribble" , I say beautiful art... Julie, Julie, Julie, your scribbles are like "petals falling" and "springtime all aglow"... I think I like your springtime much better than the real thing... ;0)

~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words my sweet friend. :) Julie

[R Smith]

I believe Julie that my library may be full of your work including this one, such a beautiful piece of poetry, the rhyme and flow is sublime, your heart is a poem i think, beautiful Julie :)

[MsJewel]

You are too kind Richard. :) Julie