Where the Wildflowers Sway

~ a romantic scribble ~

The wind has come, soft and warm

as the wildflowers sway

and the voice of love echoes in my heart…

 

 

He is mine and I am his

he wanders among the wildflowers

leading me to where we dream,

with a comfortable hand,

swallowing mine,

fingers knotted

and I am safe

sheltered from all distractions in this place

where the fields of summer lay as soft

as the flecks of sun and shade

glistening

rose petal kisses and violet scents

velvet petals surrendering to the wind

 

He brushes the hair from my eyes

wounding my lips with his sweetness

beauty touching beauty

love tasting joy

his life streaming through my veins

‘til I am weak from his loveliness

 

Yes, the wind has come

…soft and warm

 

 

Reviews

[R Smith]

it might just be that i have a library full of your work Julie, because without a doubt you are the most romantic and beautiful writer I know, your work is just so gorgeous and this poem is yet another magnificent work of magic and warmth, filled with love, i guess i like it huh! thank you :)

[MsJewel]

You are too kind Richard. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"wounding my lips with his sweetness"
how do you come up with such lines....this is quite the touching, romantic wind...

you make me feel breezy, Julie.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt the breeze Jacob. Happy New Year my friend. :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW, I think I sighed at least 5 times while reading this beautifully romantic piece… it makes me think of the book Withering Heights.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet cowboy. Happy New Year! :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You welcome dear Julie, Happy New Years to you too.

[onceloved]

Imagery of your feeling is a key qualities you have in expressing your emotion for someone so beautifully an unbroken love that will never die. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Your romantic poetry is enough to make the reader swoon, Julie. "He brushes the hair from my eyes
wounding my lips with his sweetness." That is a WOW line if ever there was one! Soft, gentle, tender.....so very lovely. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Lydi :) Julie

[Tate Morgan]

i like that it is sweet. Oh the days of love are sweet arent they ?

[MsJewel]

They are the sweetest days! :) Julie

[B-poet]

I liked the vivid sensuality from this poem. It definitely depicts the romantic essence of your chosen picture below the title. Great work Julie. It's eloquent romanticism at its best. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Happy New Year! :) Julie