On Gossamer Wing

On Gossamer Wing

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ scribbles and heartprints ~

"

                elena dudina ~ mariposa

 

 

 

When night falls cool

and the moon is pale

and there is no sound,  save the stars

dancing to the beat of my heart

I can feel him….

 

as soft as the stardust that sweeps my pillow

mending the roses

with tender hands and a gentle heart

wrapping me a cocoon of silky nights

and pastel painted tomorrows

 

fly butterfly

love is alive

…on gossamer wing

© 2014 MsJewel


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what a fine way to put ones self to sleep in sweet dreams ... i am going to try and remember this tonight just before i fall asleep .. and see if it affects my dreams the way i dream it might ;) another beautiful love poem .. delicate and with your special brand of music to it
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. Sweet dreams my sweet friend :) Julie
Einstein Noodle

9 Years Ago

i did remember to think of this poem .. and honestly .. the results were a little scandalous .. i th.. read more



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Jewel, you can really woo the coldest of hearts!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

What a lovely compliment. Thank you Alfred :) Julle
As always, very beautiful, Julie, I love the pastel painted tomorrows and the stardust that sweeps my pillow, loved it once again. :) Rudi

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rudi :) Julie
Julie this floats around us on gossamer - its strong as silk in its undertone but so light to devour and injest - gorgeous

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie
Such is a beautiful write for a good night Sweet heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jim :) Julie
Gorgeous poetry! Beautiful presentation ... Enjoyed it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thanks again for your kind comments on my poetry. I appreciate it very much :) Julie
and a beautiful poem of love with all the trimmings

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ron Happy New Year :) Julie
 wordman

9 Years Ago

happy newyear to you
That was breathtaking Julie.
I can feel him... That felt good to read.
The one we love is always felt nearby.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie
This a nice poem about love, very well written and I personally love the first stanza.
This is really good and the I like emotion around it.
Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
:) You always put so much beautiful feelings in your wrting for someone I love how soft and beautiful they are. Your words flow together with such a beautiful grace in them they as beautiful as butterfly wings are. Your poems and images you use they always compliments one another so beautifully. :) Larry

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment Larry :) Julie
onceloved

9 Years Ago

:) Your Welcome Julie.
oooooh! damn, I don't know what to say. exquisite!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my kind friend. Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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