Whispers of White

~ a winter love sonnet ~

 

 

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

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Soft is our garden of delicate light

with glistening buds still shimmering spring

painted and dewy in whispers of white

as snow is falling on light lacey wings

 

Stirring on windfalls, as chilly winds blow

yet I am a blush, a flutter within

Caught in a daydream filled with the warm glow

of your tender touch, of silk to my skin

 

Of petals scattered in sweet disarray

and my heart melting in flames of desire

Please promise my love to love me this way

until winter fades to ash in our fire

 

Snowflakes are falling in delicate light

yet love is blooming in whispers of white

~~~

Reviews

[onceloved]

:) You leave the readers with a sense of how very romantic you are when it comes to the affair of the heart showing so much tenderness in them. You have a beautiful qualities about you Jukie, when it comes to writing beautifully written poetry they are always a pleasure to read them. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank your sweet comment Larry. :) Julie

[onceloved]

You're welcome Julie. I will miss that last picture of you, I call it the listener I saw it as someone who is willing listen to you ? :) Larry

[Einstein Noodle]

Ms. Jewel .. your sensuous, tender romantic springs give my own heart wings .. you are something else girl! naughty subtle you! .. its simply beautiful! .. blood flushes my face .. ohhhh you captured me :)
damn! have to go do pushups ..
E.

[MsJewel]

Your comments always leave me with a smile. :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you make the white of winter feel more like a warm blanket than flakes of freezing cold with this tender love poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob. :) Julie