Gentle words and thoughts took reader to deep thoughts and sweet dreams.
"How I ache for a whisper of you
of angel wings
and eternal promises"
Some place are safe zones for the heart. Never attempted, never loved and always wishing for more. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
The tone of this was beautifully matched to the picture which is my first praise. Secondly your word usage is wonderful in this. Nothing leaps out of place, everything flows without interrupting the tone of the narrator. Very well done. I loved it very much and it does tug on the heart strings as well. I've personally been there so..I relate very much.
mesmerizing thoughts of moon beams and starlit wishes. A soft pen writes of a kiss of wind...
Dreams do not escape you... You written a beautiful one here
Bill
Gentle words and thoughts took reader to deep thoughts and sweet dreams.
"How I ache for a whisper of you
of angel wings
and eternal promises"
Some place are safe zones for the heart. Never attempted, never loved and always wishing for more. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
The structure and tone of this totally fit your picture. I like the wispy design that echos the wind that blows through your poem. The longing is not harsh, but more of a melancholy that you have set here, the kind set up by memories and maybe even knowing it will never be. Liked the opening line very Sandburg-ish. I'm glad I stopped to click on this little gem. It will go to my library as it is just a sigh, that I like to hold close, sometimes.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
( A kiss of wind upon a starlit wish to soothe a shattered heart that knew nothing of goodbye If only) This beautifully delicate write speaks far more to me than sleepless nights. This is lovely Julie!
I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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