Quiet Whispers

Quiet Whispers

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a collaboration with Trace ~

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Gently intertwined

vines tremble

as the wind quietly whispers

with the scent of roses

 

Beauty fills my heart

and words interlace

rising in a delicate mist

                         of the sweetest inspiration….

 

               

 

Gather me in your embrace

so you can see inside my soul

my reflection…

with mere words

 

A melody….

      your melody

etched upon my heart

lingering in a lullaby for two

 

The sweetest rhapsody

like a pairing of birds

winging to heaven

           as the world pauses...

 

  Lend me your lips

                 so I may taste your magic

mysterious and silky

          like showers of dewdrops

wet

as a falling tear

 

As soft as the beauty

that fills my heart

with quiet whispers

          and the scent of roses

 

…blooming only for you

 

 

© 2014 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
art by Lauri Blank

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As soft as velvet, your words wrapped round my heart. Julie, this is just so beautifully romantic!
" Lend me your lips

so I may taste your magic

mysterious and silky"

And yes, worthy of at least one heavy sigh! You write romance like no one else can. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Trace and I collaborated on it. He is always s.. read more
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

OMG....sorry I did not realize it. I should have. When the two of you blend ink, it is always a pl.. read more



Reviews

Oh my! MsJewel...what a splendid write! Reading your
Words renders the reader off into a fanciful, romantic
Flight. Two harmonious pens blended together
To create such an amazing write! Thanks for sharing c:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment and compliment. I know Trace will appreciate it as well. :) Ju.. read more
ms. barrie

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome. It was a pleasure to read c:
a beautiful write, good going you two. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Valentine :) Julie
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B.J
Wow that is absolutely incredible. Your words float off the page

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
B.J

9 Years Ago

Your most welcome and your work does linger in my mind when I read.
The beauty with which you write is breath taking! Your flow and words are so fluid with your meanings, you just carry the reader and put them into your poem, where they are embraced with your beauty!
Lend me your lips
so I may taste your magic
mysterious and silky
like showers of dewdrops
wet
as a falling tear
loved this!!!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Yours is one of the nicest comments and compliments I have ever received. I am humbled.
Than.. read more
very good collaboration Julie a soft and dreamy poem of love the lines are so perfect, its a lullaby and a dream of love, absolutely fantastic :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Richard :) Julie
tender, romantic, sweet, absolutely delicious. wonderful collaboration. in a way, I pity you. how on earth are you going to top this?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Woody :) Julie
Everything about this collab was pure bliss. The gorgeous, loving words, mingled with the glowing font and image all melt into perfection. Love this loving, and wish I wasn't just reading about it. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your lovely comment and compliment and I know Trace will as well.
thanks so much.. read more
Wow!!!
you create such wonderful worlds with your words..........so passionate and romantic!!
Amazing collab....
beautiful poem!!!
i loved it!!!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

you are welcome..............:) :)
"Gather me in your embrace
so you can see inside my soul
my reflection…
with mere words

A melody….
your melody"

Blown away by the cadence and beauty of your lovely words and sentiments as a reader and fan. Even your falling tears make bloom the parched earth. Wonderful as usual...:)..................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I'm certain Trace will appreciate them as well. :) Julie
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:)......
delicate and romantically beautiful! makes me feel quite wistful this morning :)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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