Captured

Captured

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a simple little love scribble ~

"

                       art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

                A prisoner of your love

           not wanting to break free

 

I’m bound to your heart

            and tethered completely

 

Mesmerized,

                                    hypnotized

I’m spellbound, it's true

Captivated,

                                     entwined

 

I’m

        tangled

                        up

                               in

                                    you

 

A prisoner of your love

         not wanting to break free

 

Caught within the beauty

                   of a love that’s

                                     captured me

© 2014 MsJewel


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this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.

beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie



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I love this soft and delicate poem, I love that painting too,
I was going to use that image for a poem that I wrote for you a few years ago.

Not sure what happened to it, Need to go find my notes.

SO anyhow, your poem is the perfect accompany for this art, or should I say the art is perfect for your poem.

Very much enjoyed this.

HUGGS>>>>Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sweet Beast. Hugs, Julie
this sounds like a beautiful love song to me julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

thanks so much Ron :) Julie
Great write Julie! Very tender. Thanks for sharing!

-CW

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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
You don't stand at the bars in a jail cell painted the color of your lovers eyes. You dream :) such a sweet poem Julie!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Zachary! :) Julie
Thatw as so wonderful, they way you express your love here is amazing, and very elegant, well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
boy, this is no infatuation! this is the real deal and I like that. in love there should be no holding back.
you're a terrific romantic poet MsJewel.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

thank you for the lovely comment and compliment Woody :) Julie
Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. I love your poetry. I need poetry to take me to better places and thoughts. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I enjoy your poetry as well. :) Julie
this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.

beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie
Wow. You do keep us prisoners to your poetic beauty that willingly we never want to break free. Ah, how you capture the eternal freedom of love...:).......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words Sami :) Julie
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......
Very smooth Julie, in the way you worded it and the feelings you expressed. Sure to make that man it is for swoon.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sweet Cowboy :) Julie

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MsJewel

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