this kind of being a prisoner is really delightful, because this is case of giving yourself up because you want to be incarcerated in someone else's heart.
beautiful metaphor here, Julie...
such soft texture to your words...you are a kind person...it shows through in your words.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Jacob, thank you. That is one of the nicest compliments. I try to be a kind person. :) Julie
Nice Imagery. In love, every person`s being caged right inside the fathoms of heart-beats tangled up in its mazes. Whether the love gives pain, happiness or makes one feeling shackled with compassion, love itself makes two loved souls feeling like prisoners - Spirits hypnotized by love. Enjoyed reading another romantic piece!
This is such an extravagant, sweet, sensual glimpse of the love within you, whispering through you. The ideal moment of feeling captured, yet free in the wildest sense. xo
I do love being this prisoner...there is something about being wrapped up in a love like this that is just beautiful.
Again Julie, such a beautiful soft tone to this one that drew me in and had me feeling each and every word.
I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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