Decorated ~ November 11, 2014

Decorated ~ November 11, 2014

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ In Remembrance ~

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                  art ~  Phillipe Sainte-Laudy

 

            In remembrance...

 

I was that little girl again

with the red paper poppy pinned to my dress

staring wide eyed

at the parade of men and women,

decorated and dressed in

                                   courage

                           proudly on display

 

heroes

not asking for applause, but accepting it

with humble smiles

 

but this time,

I didn’t fidget with the red paper poppy

when silence fell

and heads bowed in prayer

for those who never knew

                      the joy of coming home

 

Home…

a little emptier without you in it

 

            still,

the medals that decorated your chest

rest in peace

on the little wooden shelf

above the hearth…

 

courage

proudly on display

 

in remembrance

        of you…

 

a little girl’s hero…

my hero

 

                                                I miss you Dad

© 2014 MsJewel


Author's Note

MsJewel
Growing up, every Veteran's Day would be spent watching my father lead his VFW troup in the local parade. He would pin a red paper poppy to my dress. After the parade, I would run around trying to find more poppies to make a little bouquet - not truly understanding what they stood for...This is the first year since my father passed away that I've had the strength to go to the services without him. I'm glad I went.

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Julie, I am not sure which is more beautiul, your wondrous poem in tribute to your father and those we have lost or your Author's Notes. I absolutely loved both. The poem was heart breaking and the story of you collecting more poppies to make a bouquet. I remember the Veteran's Day parades in my home town, we would decorate our bikes and ride at the end of the parade which would end up at the VFW hall. Great memories brought on by a wonderful poetess.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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Gosh, this is so moving. I wish I could reach across the miles to hug you.
Beautiful poem Julie.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. I can feel your hug from here! :)Julie
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

Awwww, I'm glad. :-)
Julie, I am not sure which is more beautiul, your wondrous poem in tribute to your father and those we have lost or your Author's Notes. I absolutely loved both. The poem was heart breaking and the story of you collecting more poppies to make a bouquet. I remember the Veteran's Day parades in my home town, we would decorate our bikes and ride at the end of the parade which would end up at the VFW hall. Great memories brought on by a wonderful poetess.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
This poem is so beautiful. It moved me to tears, and goosebumps, all at once.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Wow Julie, this is a great tribute to your Father and I know he would be over the moon you mustered up the strength to go to the service without him. His little beautiful girl, now his amazing gorgeous keeping a little tradition going. This is a great tribute to your father and Veterans Day.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind, compassionate words sweet Noodle! Hugs, Julie
a fine tribute to your Father, must be hard to see the parade without your dad, this is a truly beautiful poem in remembrance thank you for posting :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Richard. My father was a special man :) Julie
Courage is not attire many wear well and glory is something held within, never to be taken. As hard of a write as this may have been, know that it's beautiful, reflecting the man your father was, as well as the sacrifice of those who answer the call. Your emotion illuminates your talent

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for sweet compassionate words :) Julie
This is so beautiful. It reflects the warm bound that will connect you with him forever. Red poppies are falling from Heaven in this moment. Poppies of pride. I'm amazed by your strength to write about it. It glorifies every single word even more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jeannette :) Julie
that was very beautiful work, really i hope he is resting in peace and i pray for your happiness... i was actually attracted to your titel since 11 novmeber is my birthday, and so sad its a sad day for you..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you and Happy Birthday! :) Julie
This is a very BEAUTIFUL tribute to your Dad someone who was a hero to you every day I know how much you are missing him in your life Julie. Days when you needing a reassuring hugs the most your Dad was always there for you, telling you very thing is going to be okay. :) Larry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Larry. You are very kind :) Julie
onceloved

9 Years Ago

You're Welcome Julie. :) Larry
Wow Julie, you certainly tugged at my heart strings with this heartfelt dedication to your dad.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sweet Cowboy :) Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome carling Julie.

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