Beautiful and Wild

~ a romantic scribble ~

           

art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

You were the red kiss of a dream

surrounding me with winds untamed

like a breath that drew the rose

yet, softer than the clouds

that melt before me now

in the haven of your arms

your love, a treasure found

hidden deep within your heart

                         beating

                                    beautiful and wild

 

In rapture, my laces loose

my hair flows free undone

fanned by your wind, I breathe you in

senses ravished with delight

a flame rising from my core

glistening on shoulders fair

my cheeks ablaze, afire!

as though a flower’s come to bud,

                         bursting

                                     beautiful and wild

 

If I told you of the joy

            found in your kiss…your touch

If I told you that my heart

only belongs to you

surrendered completely,

captivated by your love

 

Would you love me always

                                                            beautiful and wild?

Reviews

[David Scott]

A wild creature cannot care to ask such questions...
Love is or it is not...
There is no bargain to be made if we desire love. However, far too often we cage the wild heart and bargain love for comfort or conformity I think.
We are complicated creatures so t is no supplies our love affairs are complex as well.
The picture is captivating! It calls me to a memory...

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one David - it is one of my favorites. As far as the art, it is a painting by Arthur Braginsky - he is amazing. Thanks so much :) Julie

[David Scott]

Ha... I a looking gat my spelling errors... yikes. "...it is no surprise..." Thank you for reading between the typos. :)
He is an amazing artist.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nothing like a love flowing, "free and undone"---no restraints, no need for restraints...

I see that innocent love here...the one that is given with reckless abandon...

not worried about consequence, just loving.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Woody]

I totally agree with willweb. you and a few other good poets on WC keep piling the excellent writes and seem to enjoy watching us, poor reviewers, squirm trying not to repeat ourselves.

(does this count as a review?)

[MsJewel]

It is a lovely review Woody. Thank you for your kind and generous words. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[willweb]

I am quickly running out of words to describe your beautiful poetry Julie. So, I will end up repeating myself once again. There is so much love and desire in your ink. It is always a special gift to me to read your poetry.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. It makes me smile to know you enjoy my poetry. I'm a fan of yours as well. Hugs, Julie

[Sami Khalil]

"before me now
in the haven of your arms
your love, a treasure found"

Amazing romance and wording. It gives the maximum impact in the most beautiful and wild way. Excellent...:)........

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[icelandicblue]

A beautiful poem accompanied by a very probing question. Can the state of wildness be maintained? It's a gorgeous poem and your imagery is lush. The picture adds to the free and wild state of the piece.

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for your wonderful comment :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This is a beautiful poem. :-)

Kaze~

[MsJewel]

Thank you Kaze :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Matching Socks]

That is such a gorgeous poem, beautiful imagery.
So warm and romantic.

[onceloved]

I love the imagery you painted in this one that captures the passion side of your thoughts and feeling for someone so beautifully and I love the graphic you use too. :) Larry

[wordman]

Julie this is really a beautiful poem of love you have painted a beautiful picture here