Beautiful and Wild

~ a romantic scribble ~

           

art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

You were the red kiss of a dream

surrounding me with winds untamed

like a breath that drew the rose

yet, softer than the clouds

that melt before me now

in the haven of your arms

your love, a treasure found

hidden deep within your heart

                         beating

                                    beautiful and wild

 

In rapture, my laces loose

my hair flows free undone

fanned by your wind, I breathe you in

senses ravished with delight

a flame rising from my core

glistening on shoulders fair

my cheeks ablaze, afire!

as though a flower’s come to bud,

                         bursting

                                     beautiful and wild

 

If I told you of the joy

            found in your kiss…your touch

If I told you that my heart

only belongs to you

surrendered completely,

captivated by your love

 

Would you love me always

                                                            beautiful and wild?

Reviews

[David Scott]

A wild creature cannot care to ask such questions...
Love is or it is not...
There is no bargain to be made if we desire love. However, far too often we cage the wild heart and bargain love for comfort or conformity I think.
We are complicated creatures so t is no supplies our love affairs are complex as well.
The picture is captivating! It calls me to a memory...

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one David - it is one of my favorites. As far as the art, it is a painting by Arthur Braginsky - he is amazing. Thanks so much :) Julie

[David Scott]

Ha... I a looking gat my spelling errors... yikes. "...it is no surprise..." Thank you for reading between the typos. :)
He is an amazing artist.

[Louise.xx]

Beautiful, poetry at it's finest wonderfully worded and full of romance and feeling. Loved it :) xx

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind and generous comment Louise :) Julie

[Trace]

What a wonderful and beautiful poem for the one who always will hold your heart

Your poetry is always so touching.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Beast :) Julie

[MsJewel]

By the way, put your shirt on....you tryin to make all the girls crazy or what?

[Trace]

No... if I wanted to do that.... I would have used the picture I sent you. ;)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Oohhh my gosh!you knocked me out with this one dear poetess
One of my favourite of yours..love is beautiful and wild :) just like you have described. Your words ignite a passion in the heart of reader to crave these tameless love. Surely it is what you feel! Love and wishes Julie..

~Sophy

[MsJewel]

It's so nice to see you! I've missed your poetry. Thanks so much for reading my little scribble and for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Sophy Freebirds]

And i am very glad that i am blessed with your words now :) Always a pleasure dear. I am back now . For some great poet like you if i hear such beautiful things abiut my verses. I am really humbled.

[B.J]

That is absolutely beautiful, such vivid imagery of a delicately written romance

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

[B.J]

you're welcome

[Eliza Mae]

You've written a fine poem, intricate with love and bursting with passion! Bravo!

I have to say, the second stanza is my favorite! ;)

[MsJewel]

The second stanza is my favorite too. Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Tate Morgan]

Well probably but im already taken lol Your stuff is so romantic it melts the heart and weakens the knees.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Tate :) julie

[B-poet]

The romantic tenderness & sensuality of this poem is mesmerizing. Great work Julie. A lovely and genuine masterpiece. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words my sweet friend :) Julie

[stars are far]

that was very romantic and well done :)

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Nice form and presentation, and a well composed romantic verse, one that we all have come to expect from you and your lovely pen.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. thank you :) Julie

[Angad Waraich]

Well like a lot of people before me, i too am at a loss of words to describe your work.
You are just pure talent.

Well done.

Thank you for sharing.
-Angad

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous comment! :) Julie

[Angad Waraich]

You're most welcome. Keep writing