Beautiful and Wild

~ a romantic scribble ~

           

art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

You were the red kiss of a dream

surrounding me with winds untamed

like a breath that drew the rose

yet, softer than the clouds

that melt before me now

in the haven of your arms

your love, a treasure found

hidden deep within your heart

                         beating

                                    beautiful and wild

 

In rapture, my laces loose

my hair flows free undone

fanned by your wind, I breathe you in

senses ravished with delight

a flame rising from my core

glistening on shoulders fair

my cheeks ablaze, afire!

as though a flower’s come to bud,

                         bursting

                                     beautiful and wild

 

If I told you of the joy

            found in your kiss…your touch

If I told you that my heart

only belongs to you

surrendered completely,

captivated by your love

 

Would you love me always

                                                            beautiful and wild?

Reviews

[David Scott]

A wild creature cannot care to ask such questions...
Love is or it is not...
There is no bargain to be made if we desire love. However, far too often we cage the wild heart and bargain love for comfort or conformity I think.
We are complicated creatures so t is no supplies our love affairs are complex as well.
The picture is captivating! It calls me to a memory...

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one David - it is one of my favorites. As far as the art, it is a painting by Arthur Braginsky - he is amazing. Thanks so much :) Julie

[David Scott]

Ha... I a looking gat my spelling errors... yikes. "...it is no surprise..." Thank you for reading between the typos. :)
He is an amazing artist.

[emmajoy]

' In rapture, my laces loose.. '

- that short phrase takes firm hold of me, tis an almost innocent abandonment of control, of offering self to the one you want so much.. it's passion!

Beautifully expressed poetry; tis touched with a hint of Neruda then stirred with your own fine use of language and form!

[L.P.Greene]

This is an astoundingly beautiful poem. I truly enjoyed reading it.

[Shred]

Very beautiful and romantic. I was never really interested in poems and in love for that matter but this, this is good. That's for offering me a different perspective Ms Jewel

[Einstein Noodle]

well done ... such a gentle pulse of romantic fire .. just the right seductive tease .. but the matters of the heart remain on top ;)
E.

[Evee]

This was beautiful! You are very talented. :33

[sunshine hazzard]

wooow wwowooww this is soooo good

[AprilRN1210]

very fitting title for the heart that penned this sensual delight... it speaks of passion, of love, of rapture to the one that has captured that wild spirit.. the flow is enchanting and causes the heart to quicken with anticipation of where your steamy magic will lead us to next... you know I am a fan of your talent... whether it is a heart warming write to/about your daughter, a romantic poem that makes butterflies flutter, or a sexy scribble that heats up the screen-- you always deliver brilliantly... another awesome write girl!

[Valentine]

Whew, beautiful and romantic. Nice to see that you are still on the site. Loved this one. Valentine

[MsJewel]

It's the only site I would be on! Glad to see you again - thanks for your lovely comment :) Julie

[KWP]

one cannot help to be caught up in these winds with you .. the desire to share the infolding love within encapsulates the heart and mind ... Very nice xx

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Confuser]

Not in the mood for love poetry. But it was great. Thank you so much. I've posted 2; you've been writing a LONG time. I've got so much to learn. Beautiful and Wild, I love it. I'm discovering more.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comment. I'm looking forward to reading your poetry :) Julie