Beautiful and Wild

~ a romantic scribble ~

           

art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

You were the red kiss of a dream

surrounding me with winds untamed

like a breath that drew the rose

yet, softer than the clouds

that melt before me now

in the haven of your arms

your love, a treasure found

hidden deep within your heart

                         beating

                                    beautiful and wild

 

In rapture, my laces loose

my hair flows free undone

fanned by your wind, I breathe you in

senses ravished with delight

a flame rising from my core

glistening on shoulders fair

my cheeks ablaze, afire!

as though a flower’s come to bud,

                         bursting

                                     beautiful and wild

 

If I told you of the joy

            found in your kiss…your touch

If I told you that my heart

only belongs to you

surrendered completely,

captivated by your love

 

Would you love me always

                                                            beautiful and wild?

Reviews

[David Scott]

A wild creature cannot care to ask such questions...
Love is or it is not...
There is no bargain to be made if we desire love. However, far too often we cage the wild heart and bargain love for comfort or conformity I think.
We are complicated creatures so t is no supplies our love affairs are complex as well.
The picture is captivating! It calls me to a memory...

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one David - it is one of my favorites. As far as the art, it is a painting by Arthur Braginsky - he is amazing. Thanks so much :) Julie

[David Scott]

Ha... I a looking gat my spelling errors... yikes. "...it is no surprise..." Thank you for reading between the typos. :)
He is an amazing artist.

[Coyote Poetry]

"In rapture, my laces loose
my hair flows free undone
fanned by your wind, I breathe you in
senses ravished with delight"
The above lines could open the door to many nice poems. The lines could stand on their own also. I like the complete poem. Nice feel and energy for love and romance. Thank you my Poet friend for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[TL Boehm]

would you love me always, beautiful and wild. Love as it should be. Romantic, breathless and beautiful. Another fine poem

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Steve L.]

Peerless is your writing style!!! Beautifully written.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Steve :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Beautiful and wild is a dangerous combination, but that is my kind of danger… there you go again making me sigh with your beautiful and wild poetry about romance.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sweet Cowboy :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure darling Julie.

[s y e]

Sigh, this is truly gorgeous, Julie. You always touch my heart and make me smile when I read you. Your romantic scribbles are beyond romantic.

Hugs to you beautiful.

[MsJewel]

Thank you and hugs to you lovely lady! :) Julie

[Rana]

The words create a unique wondrous effect, its brimming with feeling and beauty. Gorgeous lyric.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[Dara]

Such beautiful images! The passion ebbs and flows in each and every line.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Jeannette Lunete]

A beautifully and nobely penned writing as always. I deeply enjoy your elegant wordplay and the tenderness that seems to be a crucial part of your work. Well, every following word of mine would be quite redundant. Bravo!

[MsJewel]

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry! Have a beautiful day. :) Julie

[Moonie]

Aww, this one has to be one of my favourite poems on Writer's café so far! The way you make the poem flow with passion, and then tune down to the speed of a blown kiss, and then again jazz up the meter!!! It's a complete roller coaster! Beautiful and Wild-- yes!!!

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your very kind comment and compliment. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Rossen]

One to loop into a continuous read.


100/100


Rossen

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I appreciate you! :) Julie