The Waterfall

a collaboration with trace

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

On silken skin, soft as dew

in loves embrace, just we two

float in heaven's smooth cascade

upon the fantasy we made

 

sway with me

play with me

stay with me

 

‘til my thirst is quenched at last

and your heart is beating fast

and your breath is swept away

in the velvet waters spray

 

scheme with  me

dream with me

scream with me

 

as the water turns to mist

in the wake of your warm kiss

and reality seems to fade

as all the dreams we’ve made…

 

tumble as we recall

the pleasure of it all

Loving in the Waterfall

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Not much that I can say that hasn't already been said by the other...water is a beautiful thing, and I don't know why, but water and romance just seem to feed off of each other...water is my ruling element (yes, I do pay some attention to astrology haha) so maybe I'm more sensitive to it than others, but the passion of this piece practically came at me in 3-D...you two never fail to make beautiful music together...another great one :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful description, Julie. Truly remarkable, nicely penned.

[Larq]

float in heaven's smooth cascade~
Such a refreshing get away under the waterfall with these lovers! So much energy and movement in this piece! :)

[SmittyJas]

I couldn't of read anything more romantic than this a wonderful poem a warm feeling inside brought to the surface to be shared by two.

[David Scott]

Oh my Jewel...
You have captured a common sexual fantasy here I think.
Right out of my memories as well...
Playful and sensual.
Fresh and familiar at the same time.

[fireblossom]

This is a lovely poem. Spell-casting. Breathtaking. Only a woman of depth and experience knows such things. In this case the woman is also a wonderful poet.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. :) Julie

[redflutterby]

Steamy loveliness...you two write the most romantic and playful collaborations!! The picture accentuates the words perfectly.

[Lydia Shutter]

Love the short rhyming lines....I could almost feel the water sensuously gliding over my skin. Tres romantique....and so very seductive. A wonderful collaboration by the two of you....but then again they all are! :) Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you so much Lydi. Your encouraging comments mean the world to me :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and words. I like the places and the description of the waterfall and free emotions.
"scheme with me
dream with me
scream with me"
Great lines above. I could write a poem from these three statements. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Julie.

[icelandicblue]

Waterfalls are magical and you have just sprinkled them with fairy dust:

as the water turns to mist
in the wake of your warm kiss
and reality seems to fade
as all the dreams we’ve made…

tumble as we recall
the pleasure of it all
Loving in the Waterfall

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I know trace will appreciate it as well. :) Julie

[Dara]

Simply breathtaking! There seems to be no end to the magic you both make as you put your hearts and minds together.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie