One Desire

Vickie Wade A

 

 

As free as the sky

and the sun washing over the edge of the brilliant tide

we move as water moves
joined together
stayed by what is, pulled by what will be
we glide

 

your body pressed against mine

glistening

on the passion that flows within us

we drift as one

 

one wave

one heartbeat

one desire

 

until the days last breath sails

over the seas soft rim

and we fall

 

as free as the sky

and the sun washing over the brilliant tide

~~~

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

You know that I love each of you, but together it is always such magical enchantment that flows across the page and takes your breath away.. This one is simply stunning.. It is as ONE voice whispering of what is, what was, and what will always be... exquisite imagery mixed with such affecting emotion... you can't help but feel the hearts beating as one and the passion overflowing.. I love this! amazing job you two!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous words April. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend.
Hugs, Julie

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome my sweet friend... (hugs)) back at ya!!

[Frieda P]

Another enchanting collaboration from you two, I like the way this one drifts so elegantly within two souls as one. You guys were meant to write together! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frieda. I'm a lucky girl to have found someone that makes writing poetry so easy and so much fun. I know he will appreciate your kind comment as much as I do. :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

You two together are a stunning collaboration.
Always take my breath away.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[s y e]

Holy macro, you guys I just adore reading you both. And when you collaborate it's like magic on my screen. You guys write the most romantic, vivid poems that etch themselves to the readers mind and it's truly fantastic.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment sweet lady :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

"we move as water moves
joined together
stayed by what is, pulled by what will be
we glide"

I hear the rise and fall of the waves as your romances set sail to isles of enchantment. Two sunbathing bodies are hoping that the moment never ends. This collaboration sets the site on a great adventure in the offing...Excellent...:)......................

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami. I know Trace appreciates your kindness as well. Have a lovely day my friend :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are both welcome...:).......

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your words are joined together as smooth as and as free as, the sky.

brilliant tides of syllables so connected as your voices mesh.

richly imagerous...( i just made that word up)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob. "Imagerous" - I like that. :) Julie

[Ty]

It's refreshing to get a sense of actual love in a world that keeps getting more and more fake. Thanks for the beautiful write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your beautiful comment Ty :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

we move as water moves
joined together
stayed by what is, pulled by what will be
we glide

All I can say is WOW… and sigh deeply, you two come up with some of the most romantic writes.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Cowboy. I feel the same way about your poetry. Hugs, Julie

[adreamer]

You two our one heart and soul when it come to writing very beautiful poetry together. I had forgiven how very beautiful you two work together, and how many beautiful ones you two have shared with one another. I always enjoy reading all of them. :) a friend

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry. :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

A seamless and lovely, romantic and sensual write. Another wonderful piece from you two.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What can I say?... This is stunning my friends!
I love your work of art Julie....and as always... such a romantic journey reading you two!
Great Collab, Trace and Julie! Bravo!!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet Robbie. Your visits and lovely comments are always a delight. Hugs, Julie