One Desire

Vickie Wade A

 

 

As free as the sky

and the sun washing over the edge of the brilliant tide

we move as water moves
joined together
stayed by what is, pulled by what will be
we glide

 

your body pressed against mine

glistening

on the passion that flows within us

we drift as one

 

one wave

one heartbeat

one desire

 

until the days last breath sails

over the seas soft rim

and we fall

 

as free as the sky

and the sun washing over the brilliant tide

~~~

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

You know that I love each of you, but together it is always such magical enchantment that flows across the page and takes your breath away.. This one is simply stunning.. It is as ONE voice whispering of what is, what was, and what will always be... exquisite imagery mixed with such affecting emotion... you can't help but feel the hearts beating as one and the passion overflowing.. I love this! amazing job you two!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous words April. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend.
Hugs, Julie

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome my sweet friend... (hugs)) back at ya!!

[Einstein Noodle]

like April (how we do miss her) said .."magical enchantment" .. your words captured and led me .. the waves entwined me and the sun and sky played along .. beautiful beautiful ..as love making always should be ..well done ..i had a hard time finding something i had not read yet ..but this was well worth the search Ms. Jewel ... you do romantic so very well .. good stuff says i!
E.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, you have here. :))

[SmittyJas]

One Desire is one knowing the Love Shared by two in an ocean swim on a hot summer's day when two lover's say I love you in so many ways were as free as the sky and the sun washing over the brilliant tide.

[Mark D]

Over the seas soft rim is one of the best lines I've read. Just beautiful, as is the poem

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie

[Another Relic]

Did he write "flows within us?" ha-ha Good poem from you Jewel.

[MsJewel]

I can't remember, but I'll give him credit for that one...Thanks so much Autumn. :) Julie

[Fran Marie]

a beautiful blend of ink by you two...such an enchanting magical piece ..well done

[MsJewel]

Thank you Fran :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

The last two lines are golden. You kids did a bang up job.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Eve Ola]

one wave, heartbeat, desire and as free as the sky.. wow an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[wordman]

and a great colab it is the chemistry is there great job

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is such a delight to read.You two always make magic together.Absolutely gorgeous Jules and Trace :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet lady :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome :)