Some Angel

~ a scribble ~

art ~ Ron DiScenza

 

 

 

Some Angel you have become

some graces I still see

in the soft whisper of a moonlit sky

as the wind stirs the stars

and the nightingale sings a serenade

              beautiful and wild

 

I breathe the scent of dewy leaves

and roses blushing as they blow

my senses ravished

 

Is it not the sweetest dream?

to find a piece of heaven…

 

I feel you

yet…in my heart there is a quiet ache

born of a hundred sighs and the burn of tears

and the night,

                that longs to answer

for the one I dream of cannot dream of me…

 

                Some angel you have become

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

You write with such beauty and grace. The flow of your poem submerse me in this tender charms. Angels are the beauty of poetry and are used in every which way. To spread the words of love around this poetry town. Dreams are the imagination of poets everywhere and in your dreams only the sweet things come true. Love your style been reading your for years. WIth much joy in my heart your poetry is the best by far. My heart beats with joy with every word.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind and generous commment Jim. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Jamestown]

This is so soft and sensual, well done. Thanks for sharing!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Jennesis]

Ms. Jewel, your work is always so sensually beautiful. Makes me want to crawl in and be wrapped up in the emotions you speak.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you so much :) julie

[poetdoug]

Such lovely words to describe feelings many of us have at one time or another.
Delightfully written.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[TheLostMind]

Julie, I love the way you write.. Simple, yet elegant. The flow is good.. "for the one I dream of cannot dream of me…" - this line touched me the most. Great work.. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

Beautiful and sad… a beautiful testament to a lost love. My favorite lines: "in my heart there is a quiet ache; born of a hundred sighs and the burn of tears; and the night,; that longs to answer; for the one I dream of cannot dream of me…"

[MsJewel]

Thank you fo r your kind words :) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Shadows Ember]

I love the simple sweetness in this. truly wonderful.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Shadows Ember]

no problem.

[Awakened Rose]

This was so beautiful. I love how light it felt even when the words went deep. Absolutely stunning! Thank you for sharing :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. I like the tone and the description. Made the angel become alive and well in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Julie.

[MAC]

wow....can feel your sorrow upon my own heart with every word that I read. amazing the way you write love dear Julie.

[MsJewel]

Your comments mean so much to me Mark, as I am a huge fan of your poetry. I haven't spent much time at WC as of late, life gets in the way, but I hope to catch up on your gorgeous poetry very soon. Take care my sweet friend :) Julie