With the Dawn

~ an aubade ~

            photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

            With the dawn...I sigh

wishing the night could stay

and softly I could sail

on the dreams that still play

 

A time for us when love

lit up the tender skies

as storms rose deep within

and moonlight filled our eyes

 

While symphonies so sweet

swayed softer than the flow

of tides that took us where

only a secret goes

 

And when the thunder roared

the strength of his embrace

held me in safety and

warms me as I retrace

 

The beauty of his touch

my soft breathless reply

as dreams now sail away....

with the dawn...I sigh

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

six syllables for most lines .. for me you have created precious moments between lovers .. wrapped them in moonlight, oceans, storms and touch .. i wanted to make the last line of verse three
only secrets can go; and last line last verse with dawns lighting i sigh .. or something to keep the beat .. i enjoyed reading your poem "With the Dawn" .. i couldn't remember what an aubade is so had to look it up .. thank you for that! your song is gentle, romantic to beat hell and full of images, music, textures and of course ... love!
E.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and for your suggestions. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie

[Ben Noah Suri]

Lovely write... I had written a similar one on dreams sometime ago though not as beautiful as this

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Suri :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful imagery, and this poem was amazing to read.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and sweet words.
"While symphonies so sweet
swayed softer than the flow
of tides that took us where
only a secret goes"
When we can hear music. Love is abounded and alive. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SmittyJas]

"With the dawn I sigh" So Graceful and pretty a creation of such a scene was so brilliant I got caught up in what was meant to be. Lines that made me sail away and touch my heart. They were brilliant and super smart. From where I stand they are a piece of art.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... Romance by the sea brings dreams
of ecstasy when your pen writes letters in the sands
of lovers time with moonlight in their eyes. Julie..
you embrace passion with sensations of
dreams blending with thunder and tenderness.
truly... Pat

[KWP]

it's been a while since I read one of your works and I am glad I stopped by. always your words seem to allow me to float in the wind for a while with the rhythm and rhyme ... love it xx

[Troy Henson]

This was like music to my ears Julie. Just amazing. Imagery perfect as you wrapped the love between to soul mates tightly together. Just beautiful

Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you Troy! :) Julie

[Pushkar Prabhat]

dreamy, romantic and perfect imagery!
i love it!
:)

[Dara]

"While symphonies so sweet swayed softer than the flow". Your poetry is simply music for the soul and reflects the beauty that we know lies within you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment. Hugs, Julie

[Matching Socks]

That was so beautiful Julie. :)
It's never fun getting out of bed, breaking the moment.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :)