He is...(the wind)

~ a scribble ~

 

 

 

 

I feel his vibration

                                 drifting…

 

as careless as an ocean wave

as carefree as the seabirds song

that flies with him

 

teasing my hair

tickling my cheek

 

warmed with the fever of a sunny day

soft on my skin

               coaxing a smile

                                                 surrounding me

 

he is gentle

 

I reach for him

longing to hold him close

                                                 but he is inscrutable

 

I throw out my arms blindly

twirling aimlessly

                                                 I miss him

 

he rises above me

and he is fierce as he turns cold

a storm stirring the sky

                                         stinging my eyes

racing through my soul

 

 he is swift

 

I try to out run him

                                          but I decline

my legs are heavy

and my heart is  weak

 

he is strong

 

I surrender

for I am only flesh and blood

                                a woman

 

                                                and he is the wind

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I actually had goosebumps by the time I got to the end of this, I'm running out of adjectives for your gorgeous poetry MsJewel's....romantically teasing, I think this is thus far my favorite, perhaps it's the ocean or the wind, or just the sublime feeling I'm left with, exquisitely divine. :)

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one Frieda. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

Love the way the format with this one dances along and flows well with the words, the imagery and was just beautiful.

Troy

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Troy. Thank you :) Julie

[Aayushi]

Every word of your poem was painting a picture in front of me which turned out to be very beautiful just like a dream. Good work.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[stars are far]

that took me to a cloud i guess hehe.. i loved this very much ,
so soft and like cream haha sweet.. well done ;)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Kayleigh]

Here I go dreaming again. This was gorgeous Ms Jewel. You'll have everybody on the WritersCafe dreaming. :))

[MsJewel]

You are too kind. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... it is exciting to be blown away
by a wild wind on a hot sultry day. It leaves
you entangled with feelings of surrender...
you can only reach out... embracing the gift
of a warm smile and cool shades of forever blue.
truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

Your comments are beautiful poetry my dear friend. Thank you :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... Your poems touch my soul
in a melancholy way. A true love is like the wind read moredear Julie... Your poems touch my soul
in a melancholy way. A true love is like the wind
that tousles your hair and leaves you waiting in his lair.
truly... Pat p.s. a gorgeous poem for my Journal...

[Latifa]

he rises above me
and he is fierce as he turns cold
a storm stirring the sky
stinging my eyes
racing through my soul
very graceful lines here jewel, such a strong piece

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[wordman]

well this beautiful write put me right on the beach awaiting a storm
loved the emotion in this write a spirit of it`s own

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[redzone]

Julie what an exquisite and yet bitter sweet romantic write. "I miss him" and twirling to hold onto him in the beginning but he is always there in your heart always there even when you need to go on ... you may be "only flesh and blood, a women ", but Julie i suspect you also need him even as he is wind ... if i understand your words, you will always need him even as you go on, he is part of why you are you i think and you are very much apart of his wind ... for expressing such powerful emotions, this poem is so gently passionate ..
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely and insightful review. I appreciate you! :) Julie