He is...(the wind)

~ a scribble ~

 

 

 

 

I feel his vibration

                                 drifting…

 

as careless as an ocean wave

as carefree as the seabirds song

that flies with him

 

teasing my hair

tickling my cheek

 

warmed with the fever of a sunny day

soft on my skin

               coaxing a smile

                                                 surrounding me

 

he is gentle

 

I reach for him

longing to hold him close

                                                 but he is inscrutable

 

I throw out my arms blindly

twirling aimlessly

                                                 I miss him

 

he rises above me

and he is fierce as he turns cold

a storm stirring the sky

                                         stinging my eyes

racing through my soul

 

 he is swift

 

I try to out run him

                                          but I decline

my legs are heavy

and my heart is  weak

 

he is strong

 

I surrender

for I am only flesh and blood

                                a woman

 

                                                and he is the wind

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I actually had goosebumps by the time I got to the end of this, I'm running out of adjectives for your gorgeous poetry MsJewel's....romantically teasing, I think this is thus far my favorite, perhaps it's the ocean or the wind, or just the sublime feeling I'm left with, exquisitely divine. :)

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one Frieda. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Dara]

Your poem left me feeling light as air. It is just so magical!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment. It's wonderful to see you here! :) Julie

[cycy]

I surrender
for I am only flesh and blood
a woman
and he is the wind
-beautiful julie well written

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

comparing a lover to the wind, done so effortlessly....and with such a strong current of conception ---

then the meeting of the two with such force...and then him leaving you powerless, breathless...unable to fight, just to give in....and be ruled by that love breeze.
another hit by you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Jacob
:) Julie

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Great word choices - you draw us right in and grab our hearts and imaginations and then leave us to think. very good pen

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[Cory Barrett]

Jewel you sure know how to fly the heart kite

[MsJewel]

Thank you Cory! :) Julie

[Marcovy Duwin]

Beautifully penned. I enjoyed the read.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[Steve L.]

Whoa!!! Warmth, cold, elusive...beautifully written!!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Steve :) Julie

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man! i love this .. its fantastic .. into the library it goes .. imagined myself that wind and what love .. so intricate, delicate and stormy .. well worth the ride!
E.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you for the lovely comment! :) Julie

[adreamer]

Julie, you write very beautiful poetry it go so beautifully with the picture you use.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie

[adreamer]

You are welcome Julie, see ya

[John Preston]

You are a woman who will never grow old
He is the wind as old as the heavens so bold.

Nice piece.

[MsJewel]

Thank you John :) Julie